Swamp King

[Verlocity]

A new card that i made.

Effect: This card can also be treated as a WATER-Attribute monster. Whenever this creature destroys a card your opponent discards 5 cards from the top of his Deck. To keep this creature on the field you have to pay 500 Life Points at the End of your turn.

 

Pls post the errors so i can change them.

[Zombiehunter14]

Very nice card the only thing i would do is change the name or find a differnt picture that looks more kingly if you get what i mean.And i would change it to a fish type just because it would make more sense.

 

Id rate it 9.5/10

[B3lly N3rd]

ugh..bad ocg...my ocg is bad but this is worse!!..9.5/10??? enh more like 6/10

[Zombiehunter14]

ugh..bad ocg...my ocg is bad but this is worse!!..9.5/10??? enh more like 6/10

 

 

Well I only look at the effect of the card,not the way its worded. Im not that uptight and I look at the pic.

[B3lly N3rd]

are you tryin to say im uptight??..i dont take ocg that seriously

[PANDORUM™]

Dont worry Hades Eros Zombiehunter14 is only a noob and will learn how to rate cards properly in the future but now is the present and this is how im going to rate this card.

 

The pic is ok for the name.

its go no circulation.

they dont usually put a real word in the ID .

the effect needs to be toned down a bit.

maybe you should add 1 more effect onto the card so its more powerful and cus its the swamp king and its a bit more powerful then it could be in a set as the most powerful.

theres a few OCG errors and uneeded words in the effect.

change the type to fish or keep it as beast any of them sute this card.

 

a rating of 3.4/10