OCG help

[moldfire]

can anyone help me with my OCG, I have created a card that i want to try and use against a friend but i cant get the cards OCG right.

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Advanced Summoned except by Releasing 2 FIRE monsters from your hand or field. This monster's original ATK is equal to the combined Level Stars of the released monsters x 300. If this card would be destroyed by battle remove from play 2 monsters from your hand, field or graveyard to send it back to your hand.

[LiAM]

Wrong Section

 

Try Written Cards.

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Advanced Summoned except by Releasing 2 FIRE monsters from your hand or field. This monster's original ATK is equal to the combined Level Stars of the released monsters x 300. If this card would be destroyed by battle remove from play 2 monsters from your hand, field or graveyard to send it back to your hand.

 

WTF is Advance Summoned?

 

Release = Tribute, the new stuff isn't out yet.

 

Level Stars? WTF? It's just Level.

 

send it back = add/ return

 

graveyard = Graveyard.

[moldfire]

thank you

[OmegaWave]

Looks pretty good to me. Though i'm only an expert with the TCG Card Grammar. Oh well, as the OCG Teacher for Duel Academy, I should take the responsibility to study this.