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Well here it is my first fanfiction about “Yugioh!” in general. I mean I never done this sort of thing before. Making decks from a very wide variety (I don’t have much of a wide variety of cards in real life), making duels with said variety. This will be difficult but I will get through it. I actually made this April 18, 2008. But I dunno became busy with life and stuff. I will tell you now, later in the series will be a few YCM cards I made in this story for plot purposes. Lastly all cards will be written in english with TCG card rulings. That's the format I follow and that's the format that will be used. Of course there may be a few OCG rulings if required. Anywho, here we go. Hope you enjoy!

 

Currently Rated: PG-13

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1-Welcome to Duel Academy]

New Found Duelists

 

He was reluctant at first but eventually had decided he wanted to join the Duel Academy. At first he thought if he went to the same school as his father, he could become just as good as his father and better improve himself later on. Yet that was a failed attempt since it was quickly losing its appeal to him. According to his father, it wasn’t even the school that taught him dueling as a matter of fact. It was his father’s grandfather; his great-grandfather. That’s why he only went there for learning rural teachings. Things such as mathematics, science, history; that type of stuff. He gained all his dueling skills from his father’s teachings. That’s what made this young man such a talented duelist today. He even won two out of three dueling tournaments in his life. Of course, they weren’t pro league tournaments though. He thought he wasn’t ready for that. Then that day came. Evil just had to arise again. Now he had to live with only his mother. Although there wasn’t a problem with that, it’s just why his family? They already defeated evil so why is it back? Then again, that’s what evil does. Wherever there’s good there’s evil. He understood that and was just taken aback by such the time it came. He looked out the window as he stared into the distance.

 

“Well, good thing Seto owns this place eh Isamu?”

 

“Yeah, you said it. Thanks to him, we got in for free. Of course he still had us take that exam to see which year we belonged.”

 

“Ah it was easy man, no contest. I just wish they let the two of us battle. Then that would be a challenge. You would lose though.”

 

“Oh just shut the hell up you egotistical jerk. Beside, you know full and well Atemu I would wipe the floor with you.”

 

Atemu turned from his window to face Isamu Both as both glared at each other dangerously. You could see the lightning coming from their eyes intercepting one another. They were rivals which was odd for them. Their fathers were best friends and yet their father’s sons were rivals. It was odd, but after dueling each other for so long it became understandable. That still didn’t mean they weren’t best friends still. Atemu then stopped his glaring and looked back to the window. He looked at his reflection. He was wearing black and blue striped short-sleeved shirt with his collar up. He had baggy blue designer jeans with a pocket over his back pockets. There was also a sky blue swirl going around each pants leg from top to bottom with a smaller thin yellow line running in between the light blue swirl. His sneakers were yellow on blue and white Nike low tops (check is yellow). His hair was jet black with magenta-rimmed edges, which go down to his back a little bit below the shoulder blades near the middle of his back (think of Super Saiyan 4 Goku’s hair). At the front there seems to be a very small streak of golden ends growing in the front yet they were obviously cut. His facial features were eerily similar, yet not exactly like his father’s. Yet he had his mother’s soft beautiful reddish brown eyes.

 

He had his backpack on him which had a bountiful of things. It would look bad if he was wearing one of them. He looked over to his friend’s image. He complimented his father’s look yet did not have the same hairstyle as he had dirty blond hair that spiked up just a small bit. He keeps it up to a little more than below his shoulders but a smidge above the half of his back. He was sporting a blue jacket that was similar to his father’s with a blue and white short-sleeve shirt underneath. He was wearing black faded fitted jeans and black tennis shoes. He had his backpack laying on his lap while he was sitting down checking out his cards. Atemu then turned his attention back to the window as they still were flying.

 

 

“Attention passengers, we are now arriving at Duel Academy Island. Please fasten your seatbelts as we prepare to land.”

 

Both boys then went to look out the window which they sighed in awe at the site. Their eyes widen as they saw the island, with a huge building in the middle were everywhere else was seemingly covered by trees. Atemu went back to his seat and they both buckled up.

 

“Hey Isamu, did you know that Seto daughter goes to this school now?” Atemu asked in a singsong voice.

 

“What, since when did she join the Duel Academy?” Isamu asked baffled.

 

“Well I heard that she joined about a month and a half ago. Yet, I could be wrong.”

 

Isamu shrugged with a seemingly uncaring attitude and felt that they were finally landing. It was time to see what this school was all about. The speaker then went off again.

 

“We have now arrived at Duel Academy Island.”

 

The kids then went to the front exit as the door opened and the ramp came down. With backpacks strapped on securely, they were then greeted by none other than the head of the school.

 

“Ah welcome Atemu Muto and Isano Wheeler to Duel Academy. I am Chancellor Sheppard, headmaster of this school. This here is Professor Vellian Crowler.”

 

As they turn to Professor Crowler, they both stare in shock at his odd looks. They took a dive with the gender and winged it.

 

“Hello, headmaster Sheppard and Ms. Crowler.” They both bowed in greetings.

 

Sheppard just roared in laughter while Crowler was fuming with these kids indignity.

 

“I am not a woman you little brats; I am a full grown male and watch your tongue. Its professor to you,” Crowler yelled still fuming at their comment.

 

“Well sorry ma-sir. We didn’t know. It was hard to tell which gender to tell you from; what with the purple lipstick and all,” Isamu said in their defense. This made Crowler only angrier while Sheppard only laugh more.

 

“Oh dear that was a good laugh. Now children, I believe you were Isamu Wheeler,” he said pointing to Isamu. “And you were Atemu Muto am I correct?”

 

They both nodded in compliance.

 

“OK good, now let me introduce you to the dorm you will be staying in. You will first start out in Osiris red. Although you showed great potential in your entrance exams, it is still required of all transfer students to start off at Osiris red. If you wish, then you can prove your worth later on to rise up the ranks.”

 

“So wait let me get this straight, you are saying that Osiris red is the lowest rank in the school,” asked Isamu.

 

“Yes, that is right. You will be staying with the rest of the Osiris sla-students there,” Crowler stated in a sly tone.

 

“I am guessing these dorms are named after the god cards. So that means that Ra dorms are the highest rank?”

 

“Actually not quite Isamu. Although these dorms are named after the three legendary god cards, Ra yellow is in fact not the top. Obelisk blue is.”

 

“But that doesn’t make sense. It should be the yellow dorm that should be on top, Osiris in the middle and Obelisk last. I mean since your naming them after god cards, Ra should be on top simply because it’s the strongest god card; Osiris, because it’s better than Obelisk.”

 

“Well the case may be, Seto decided to make like that so there is nothing we can do. Although I like your logic on things Isamu, Atemu don’t you have anything to say on the matter.”

 

“No, Osiris is my favorite god card and I will only be blunt by saying it should the highest rank. So no input from me.”

 

The whole conversation had taken up the walking time without them realizing it. Before they knew it, they were at the Osiris dorm.

 

“Mr. Sheppard, when introducing me, could you not say what my last name is.”

 

“Hmm why say that for Atemu?”

 

“Well it’s because, I hate people tackling me about this and that about my father. It’s too troublesome. It can get pretty annoying.” Atemu then scratched the back of his head while chuckling a bit at his pettiness.

 

“Ah I understand. Don’t want to make false friends. Well although that is nothing to worry about, I will respect that wish of yours. Do you want the same thing Isamu?”

 

“Nah, I don’t care if they know my last name or not. It doesn’t matter anyway, not many people care for the third best duelist in the world.”

 

“Wait Joey Wheeler is the third best duelist in the world. I was wondering where he ranked up. Man although he isn’t the best, your father was a great duelist and still is today. Do you think I could get his autograph?”

 

 

“Thanks, to think how happy my dad will be from hearing such compliments,” Isamu smiled sheepishly as he scratched the back his head in embarrassment. Why the heck did this guy suddenly turn into a fan girl? It was only his dad after all.

 

“Ah no problem Isamu. Now let’s go inside to introduce you two. I don’t want to keep these students waiting any longer.”

 

“Excuse me Chancellor, but I think will start heading back to start grading papers now.”

 

“Sure no problem Crowler,” Sheppard said enthusiastically.

 

“And get away from current and future Osiris slackers,” Crowler muttered.

 

“What was that Crowler, you’re mumbling again?”

 

“Oh nothing Chancellor. See you later.”

 

Chancellor Sheppard watched him for a moment as Crowler faded into the distance.

 

“Ah Crowler, what a guy.” He turned back to his new pupils. “Alright children, let’s go say hello to your new roommates.”

 

He opened the door as only the three students, all from different dorms, sat together eating their food. As they turned their heads to see who walked through the door, a boy wearing an Obelisk blue outfit and sky blue hair walked in along with another boy wearing a Ra yellow outfit only his sleeves were missing and was wearing a dinosaur head cap on his head. In the far corner of the room was a boy wearing an all black outfit with spiky black hair sitting at a table alone eating his food complaining about the food he called crap. Where the trio was sitting, there was a young man who was wearing a Ra yellow who had his hair slicked backed. The second boy there was wearing an Osiris red outfit and had brown hair with a light brown patch in the middle. The last of the trio was a girl who was wearing what seemed to be an Obelisk blue outfit only the colors were vice-versa from the boy’s version and was wearing a mid-thigh high blue skirt and blue heeled boots. She also had light blue long fingerless gloves on with small stars on them. She had long sporadic light brown hair and her eyes complimented her hair in the same color. She was truly a sight for sore eyes. At least to those that cared anyway. It seemed that Atemu was one of those people. Or so it seemed anyway. He hurriedly tried to put on a face of indifference when looking at her.

 

Everyone there turned their eyes on the boys that were accompanying Sheppard. The brown haired boy was the first to call out.

 

“Hey Chancellor Sheppard, what brings you here? Are these guys’ new students to the school?”

 

“Why, how correct you are Jaden. Yes these are new students and I came to introduce them. They will start their rank in Osiris red. They will be in the same year as you all so please make them feel at home. To my right is Wheeler Isamu.” Isamu made a single wave as he smiled softly. “And this here to my left is Atemu.” Atemu mimicked his friend’s gesture with a look of indifference look.

 

“Hey guys, welcome to the Red dorm. Here you won’t have to experience the snooty and uptight dorm that is the blue,” exclaimed the red dressed student as he ran up to them to introduce.

 

“Hey,” yelled the girl.

 

“Here we like to give everyone respect regardless of your color. I’m Jaden Yuki. Don’t forget that name as soon I will be the next king of games.”

 

“Well, it seems like you kids will be getting along just fine. Atemu, Isamu, your stuff is right outside so get it when you’re ready. As for me, I will now be taking my leave. I will leave you all to get acquainted. Tootles.”

 

Chancellor Sheppard then left the facility making his way back to his own.

 

‘Yes this will be a fun filled year indeed.’

 

Back in the dorm people were making various conversations with the newcomers when the boy in all black yelled out.

 

“Look at this loser. What’s the deal with the red rimmed edges on your hair? You pretending that you’re Muto Yugi or something.”

 

“Who me?” said Atemu abstractly pointing at himself?

 

“Yeah you loser. You want to be like Yugi so much that your are now copying his hair color?”

 

“What no, this is how I was naturally born. You seem like a nice guy.” The last sentence was said in a sarcastic manner giving a glare to match.

 

“Oh don’t mind him Atemu. He is always like that. Just trying to find ways to make himself look better than the rest. Hi I’m Rhodes Alexis. These here are Syrus Truesdale.” She pointed the light blue haired student. “Over here is Tyranno Hassleberry and Bastion Misawa.” They both gave a short wave signaling hello. “And you already met Jaden so need for introductions there. So the guy with the black on is Chazz Princeton.” He just huffed at being introduced to two more losers.

 

‘Great just what we need, two more slackers,’ thought the impeccable Chazz.

 

“Just make sure you refer to me as “The Chazz”, got that?”

 

“So what you refer to yourself in third person perspective? Wow and you called my friend here a loser,” Isamu mused.

 

“So, you want to be the next King of Games huh Jaden?” asked Atemu as he walked up to him.

 

“Yup, I know I’ll make it to the top,” he said gleefully.

 

Atemu looked at him for a second as did Isamu.

 

“Looks like more competition to pound in the dust,” Isamu said with the same glee.

 

Jaden rubbed his nose once as he stared at his new friends.

 

“Well I and Atemu will be heading to our room now. Can someone direct us to our rooms? That’s if they don’t mind of course.”

 

“Sure thing kid, I know my way around here enough to know.” Alexis then got up as she guided the two children out and onwards to their new room. They walked in silence as they ventured. For some reason, Atemu couldn’t take his eyes off her. She was like some type of hypnosis. What was it that attracted his eyes to her? It was too quiet, so he decided to break it.

 

“So Alexis, if you are an Obelisk Blue, then why you hanging out here in the red dorm for? According to what that Jaden kid said, it looks like you’re one of those snooty uptight students that think their better than the rest. So what’s the deal?”

 

Alexis sighed as she heard this. She should have known this was going to happen. At least after from what Jaden said earlier.

 

“Well, I should be but I like it here. I am here with my friends and I still get to sleep comfortable at night. The only consequence with that is living with Chazz.”

 

“Wait so if you get to sleep comfortably even while living here, does that mean these dorms are crap?” Isamu was nervous just hearing that. Not being able to sleep wonderfully, what kind of dorm are they holding for Osiris Reds?

 

“Well, it pretty quaint from what I heard. The only problem I heard about it was cockroaches and small space.”

 

“WHAT!!! COCKROACHES?!!!” exclaimed Isamu overdramatically. Atemu felt a overdramatic faint coming on from his friend.

 

“Well they probably cleaned it up by now so don’t worry. Ah here we are. Welcome to your new room boys.”

 

She opened the door and the boys peered in to see what it looked like. If they saw Jaden’s room, then they could say it look just like his. They lugged in their stuff and flopped on the bottom bunk. Alexis sat in the chair next to the desk and watched them.

 

‘Wow, so we have two new students. Plus they were able to go straight into second year unlike every other new student. These kids must be good duelist to pull off something like that. I wonder how well though. Well the one named Isamu I can understand. He is of course related to Joey Wheeler or course. I bet his father taught him a bunch. But that Atemu kid; he’s a complete mystery. Didn’t talk much. Hmm and yet he reminds me of someone; someone important. I wonder who though. I’ll ask the rest of the crew to see if they know?’

 

“Alright boys, I will leave you to it to your unpacking. I’ll catch you guys later. See ya.”

 

After she had walked out, Atemu and Isamu immediately went into conversation.

 

“Hey Atemu, so what do you think of this school so far. We may have already found new competition.”

 

“Well, let us see here. The Chancellor seemed pretty nice and that other dude with the purple lipstick seemed to creep me out. I couldn’t figure out whether was he a girl or a boy. Well the kids we met so far seemed to be pretty energetic. Especially that Jaden kid; he was pretty confident about himself. Yet like I always say, talk is cheap. So let’s see what he got. And then there’s that one girl; Alexis Rhodes…” He soon started to ponder on her until Isamu interrupted.

 

“Yeah I hear you. Man she was hot. I wonder if she has a boyfriend?” Isamu then looked up at the bed above them while lost in the clouds. Atemu simply smirked.

 

“Isamu, it’s always the girls with you. Besides, I thought you already liked someone hmm.”

 

Isamu then blushed in embarrassment. Atemu’s smile only broadened from this.

 

“Sh-shut Atemu. I am a man; I have a right to like more than one girl. Besides, we both know she won’t go out with me. Also, I don’t like her like that.”

 

“Whatever. Well since I got so many cards, I better start making decks.” Atemu then got up from the bed as he walked over to the desk situated in the room.

 

“What about your father’s deck Atemu?”

 

Atemu then stopped with his back turned towards his rival.

 

“I won’t edit that deck. That deck is sacred and will be ruined if tampered with by adding unnecessary cards. Well that’s what I believe anyway.”

 

Without looking back he sat down at the desk, took his lot of cards and started to organize. Isamu only looked at him with concern. Yet that lasted only for a quick moment.

 

“Well let me know when you’re done so I can reorganize my deck. I’ll be putting away our luggage for now.”

 

Alexis had returned to the cafeteria where the rest of the gang was waiting for her return. As soon as she walked in, Chazz opened his mouth first.

 

“Oh Alexis my dear, you have returned. So what was the deal walking the new guys?”

 

She groaned from Chazz’s swooning.

 

“Well I wanted to get some information out of these guys. Unfortunately that didn’t work as they didn’t say much to me.”

 

“Well, that Atemu was a loser anyway. Only a loser would try to make himself look like someone else. Thinking he’s cool with his edges and his demeanor. I’ll put that chump in his place.”

 

“Oh cool it, private. Let the kid be. He hasn’t even bothered you yet and already you’re starting on him,” said Tyranno.

 

“Well anyway did any of you notice that he looks familiar to someone?”

 

Everyone was baffled by Alexis’s question.

 

“I can’t put my finger on it but I he does look similar to the guy I’m thinking of,” Syrus explained. “Yet I can’t believe it. That Isamu kid, he is a Wheeler. You think he is Joey’s son you guys?”

 

“Oh yeah I almost forgot about him. He most likely is Joey’s son. Or maybe he is Serenity’s son instead.”

 

“I don’t think so Bastion. I think he’s Joey’s son. I mean, he bears a similar resemblance to Joey anyway.”

 

“Well, that makes me want to duel him all the more. He was most likely trained under his father. Plus, if Atemu knows him, that means he must be good as well.”

 

Alexis just rolled her eyes at her friend’s comment. He always wants to duel.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2-A Taste of Power]

 

Testing the Duelist

 

A week had passed and there was much gossip. It wasn't good. Well most of it anyway. It was about Atemu and Isamu. You would expect a 'wow these guys are great duelist' or 'man they're cute' or even a 'damn these kids are wicked smart'. Well there was the total opposite of those things. People said thing like, 'damn what a sucky duelist that Atemu is', 'wow he funking sucks. What a loser', 'Man how did a decent duelist like Isamu be friends with a complete loser'. The most popular though was 'wow in the hell did that Atemu kid get into second year let alone in the school.' Yes it was bad things all around for Atemu. Yet for some reason still claimed he was better than those he faced. Even after the humiliating losses he got. In one duel, he got his ass owned with his opponent not even summoning a powerful monster, but beating him with a Sanji The Dark Clown. He also faced the main gang, with Jaden Yuki being the last one. Jaden offered him help with his dueling skills. Yet even with the help, it was no help at all. He still sucked. The meanest person to him was Chazz but that wasn't much of a surprise. Yet Atemu ignored him and only replied on occasions with "don't worry kid, I still can own your ass anytime. Just not now.” People asked Isamu what was wrong with that kid, but he replied that that was Atemu for you. THough on the bright side, they figured out that Isamu was the sone of Joey Wheeler. One girl from the Obelisk blue girl dorm thought this was hilarious. But as the week gone by, she was utterly pissed. Atemu couldn't be that bad. So it was time to speak for a duel with the chancellor.

 

"Atemu man, how long will this go on?" asked Isamu

 

"Well since this is Saturday, this was the last day. Tomorrow will be different. Oh and I spoke with the chancellor today and he said that I have a duel tomorrow at the duel arena. If I don't win, I will be demoted to first year."

 

"Oh that sounds fun," Isamu replied excitedly pulling up a chair besides his best friend. "Did he say who your opponent was?"

 

"No but he said to be prepared," Atemu said nonchalantly.

 

"Alright then, is your deck ready?"

 

"Yup!"

 

"Then let’s go to bed. You have a duel to win."

 

It was now Sunday and everyone was lining up in the room. Many whispers went around. People heard the stakes and who the opponent was. They were all saying Atemu was going down. The main gang didn't know who it was that was the duelist opponent was going to be. Atemu arrived on the field clad in the usual Slifer red outfit. Then on his other side arrived a semi tall girl who was clad in the usual obelisk blue girl attire. She had long mid back length brown hair in a sporadic manner. Her eyes were undoubtedly blue seeing as both her parents had blue eyes. Her skin was light brown almost tan like but obviously wasn't. She wore a string around her neck holding up a case that looked like it was holding a card. But if you were to see it in full observation it opened into two parts showing her mother and father. On her forehead was adorned with a gem thing like her mother's.

 

"His opponent is Amaterasu," Alexis said gasping. "She's like one of the best duelist among the girls in my dorm. If I wasn't here she would have been dubbed with the title of 'Queen' although quite annoying. Man I feel sorry for Atemu right now. Plus being taught by her father, Seto really makes her all the more better."

 

"You said it Alexis," said two voices under her.

 

"Oh hey Jasmine, Mindy. Didn't notice you down there."

 

"See, if he was skilled I would totally date him. He is really cute but his dueling skills totally make him unattractive."

 

Alexis rolled her eyes at her friend's ranting and decided to ignore them. At least they got over the different dorms ordeal.

 

"I totally know what you mean Jasmine. I think that Isamu kid is cool too but I want to see him duel first."

 

The attention was back on the duel and Amaterasu started to speak.

 

"Atemu, Atemu, Atemu, I can't believe the rumors I am hearing about you. What's the deal man? And I hear you still bragging about you being the best."

 

"Let's duel and you'll find out."

 

"Fine by me."

 

"DUEL!" they both said each of them activating their duel disks. Unlike the regular academy duel disk like Atemu was adorning, Ameretsu's was Egyptian style.

 

“I'll start things off I believe” Atemu said as he drew his sixth card. He grimaced when he saw what he drew. “I'll place one monster face down on the field and place two cards face down and end my turn” he said as three face down cards appeared on his side of the field.

 

“You call that a turn? If that is all you can do, why even bother bragging?” Amaterasu asked. Atemu glared at her.

 

“Why don't you just draw your card and we'll see what I can and can't do” Atemu shot back.

 

“Alright, since you’re so eager to lose” Amaterasu said as she drew her own card. “I think that this should suffice to beat you. I summon my Agido in attack mode” she said as a red ball appeared on her side of the field. It's eye looked like the same eye from ancient Egyptian pictures. It also had two gold claws off to the side (atk 1500/def 1300). “Now, attack his face down monster with Concentrated Eye Beam” she shouted. A beam shot of the fairies eye and hit the face down monster.

 

“Sorry, but the monster that you just destroyed was my Troop Dragon. Since you destroyed him in battle, I can summon another Troop Dragon from my deck, and I'll put him in defense mode” Atemu said. Then, three identical dragons appeared on his side of the field. All of them green and wearing armor. They also all had their shields up and ready to defend (atk 700/def 800).

 

“Stupid swarm monsters” Amaterasu grumbled. “Fine, I'll place a face down card of my own and end my turn” she said as a face down card appeared on her side of the field.

 

FIELD ANALYSIS

 

Atemu: Troop Dragon (defense mode, 800), 2 face downs, 3 cards in hand, 4000 lp

 

Amaterasu: Agido (attack mode, 1500), 1 face down, 4 cards in hand, 4000 lp

 

“Come on deck, don't fail me now” Atemu begged as he drew a card. “Alright, let's see how much you like this. I sacrifice my Troop Dragon in order to summon my good friend. Come on out Des Volstgalph” he said. A large red and gray dragon appeared on his side of the field. It stood on its hind legs and had two wings behind it (atk 2200/def 1700). “Now, go, Des Volstgalph, attack her Agido with Rending Claw” Atemu shouted. His dragon gave a mighty push with his wing and flew towards the helpless fairy. It sliced through the monster with ease and reduced Amaterasu's life down to 3300. “Now for his special ability. Each time he destroys a monster as a result of battle, you lose 500 more life points” he declared triumphantly as Amaterasu's life dropped down further to 2800. She seethed as more life points evaporated from her. “That should do it” Atemu said happily.

 

“You know, you sound pretty happy considering that you forgot about my own monsters ability” Amaterasu said. “You see, when Agido is destroyed as a result of battle, I get to roll a dice. Then I can summon a fairy type monster from my hand that is the same level as the number I roll” Amaterasu explained as a dice appeared above her. The dice then hit the ground and begun to spin. When it stopped, Amaterasu smirked at the results. “Looks like I rolled a five, that means I can summon this. Come on out, Airknight Parshath” she cried out. What looked like a man came down. He had on weird armor that seemed to have two angel wings in the front. He also wielded a sword expertly in one hand (atk 1900/def 1400). “And guess what, now it's my turn” she said as she drew her own card. “Next up, I'll use my face down Jar of Greed to draw an extra card” she said as jar with a smirking face appeared in front of her and exploded, she then drew another card.

 

“Aw man, this sucks” Atemu said realizing that he was in trouble.

 

“Now I'll use my field spell, Sanctuary in the Sky” she called out as the whole field changed. They now were standing on top of clouds with a large castle behind Amaterasu. “Next up I'll sacrifice my Airknight in order to special summon a friend of his. Awaken from the clouds, Neo Parshath, The Sky Paladin!” Amaterasu shouted. The man was then replaced by a much larger man. His armor seemed to be made of nothing but angel feathers. He had two massive wings behind him that only added to his size (atk 2300/def 2000). “Plus, I still have my normal summon, so I'll bring out my Freya, Spirit of Victory” she said as what looked like a cheerleader appeared. The monster jumped around a few times waving her pom-poms (atk and def 100). “She has two effects. The first increases the attack of all Fairy type monsters attack by 400 points. The other makes it to where if I have another Fairy type monster, you can't choose to attack her. Now, Neo Parshath, attack his Des Volstgalph with Angelic Rain” she said. Neo Parshath raised both of his wings into the air. Beams of light shot out of the wings and struck the dragon cutting it to pieces and reducing Atemu's life points to 3500. “Now I attack your life points directly with Freya. Go, Pom-Pom Pounding” she said. The cheerleader jumped and struck Atemu with her pom-poms, reducing his life points to 3000. “And things aren't getting any better for you. Now I use the spell card Pot of Greed to draw two more cards” she said as she drew two more cards. “Now I use them both, first is Spell Absorption. Now every time a spell card is used, I gain 500 life points. Next comes the spell card Goblin Thief. This normally lowers your life by 500 and gives me 500 points, but due to Spell Absorption, I gain 1000 life points” she said as Atemu's life dropped to 2500 points, and her life rose to 3800. A light then appeared around Neo Parshath.

 

“Oh great, what's going on now?” Atemu asked.

 

“Nothing much. You see, while Sanctuary in the Sky is on the field and my life points are higher than yours, he gains the difference in attack” she explained as Neo Parshath's attack rose by 1300 points. “That's enough torture for now” she said.

 

FIELD ANALYSIS

 

Atemu: no monsters, 2 face downs, 3 cards in hand, 2500 life points

 

Amaterasu: Neo Parshath (attack mode, attack 4100), Freya (attack mode, 500), no face downs, no cards in hand, 3800 life points

 

“Alright, here we go” Atemu said. “First off I'll use my face down, Ring of Destruction; this destroys a monster on the field and inflicts damage equal to its attack points to each of us. The monster I choose is Freya” Atemu said as the fairy got a large ring around its neck. It then exploded and both of the duelists lost 500 life points. “There goes the attack bonus for Parshath” he said as the monster's points fell by 400.

 

“So what, he still has 3600 points to crush you with” Amaterasu said confidently.

 

“You know, you've really got to lay off of the confidence. You haven't won yet” Atemu said. “And this move will prove it. I use the spell card White Dragon Ritual and send my Divine Dragon Ragnarok to the grave in order to summon my Paladin of White Dragon” he said as a white light appeared on his side of the field. A man riding a dragon suddenly appeared. The man was dressed in mostly white armor but had gold edges. He rode a mostly white dragon, but it had blue eyes (atk 1900/def 1200). “Now I use his ability and sacrifice to him to summon a very special monster from my deck. Come on out, Blue-Eyes White Dragon!” Atemu shouted as the man riding a dragon vanished. A loud roar could then be heard and a large dragon took the place of the man. It was a pure white color, but its most distinguishing features were its pure blue eyes (atk 3000/def 2500).

 

“Grrr, so you have a powerful monster, my monster is still more powerful” Amaterasu said.

 

“For now, next up, I summon my Twin-Headed Behemoth in attack mode” he said as a mostly purple dragon appeared. It had two heads, one of the heads had a red spike, the other had a blue (atk 1500/def 1200). “Now for the finished touch, my equip card United We Stand, and I'll use it on my Blue Eyes. Now for every face up monster I have out, he gains 800 attack points” he said as the dragon let out another roar as its attack points rose to 4600.

 

“F...forty six hundred?” Amaterasu said in disbelief.

 

“Yup, and I know all about your field spells other ability. That's where my other face down comes into play. Dust Tornado destroys your field” he said as a massive tornado whipped up and destroyed the castle and clouds, and also lowered Neo Parshath's attack back to 2300. “Now, Blue Eyes, attack her monster with White Lightning” he commanded. The dragon opened up its mouth and released a massive attack. It cut straight through the other monster and destroyed it. Amaterasu raised her arm in front of her as the dust flew around her, and her life dropped to 1500. “Now, go Behemoth, attack her life points directly with Double Blast” he said. Both of the dragons opened up their mouths and shot a beam straight through Amaterasu, and lowered her life to zero.

 

Amaterasu dropped to her knees as her life points reduced to zero. As the virtual animations dissipated, Atemu smirked and threw his right arm to the side.

 

"I'm still the best." Everyone in the arena was awestruck. The same kid that everyone thought that was shitty duelist beat Amaterasu, one of the top duelists in the school. This was astronomical. There was small laughter that grew bigger until it filled the entire room. Amaterasu calmed herself shortly after while getting up and was smiling.

 

"It seems as though I fell prey to pride. I should have known your skills would never diminish. You're still as good as ever."

 

This baffled almost the entire crowd. He was good. No amazing. But all those duels showed he sucked like hell. Even Jaden was having a hard time believing. Isamu didn't care because he knew the plan. But although Jasmine didn't know, she now had hearts in her eyes and her hands clasp together. He was now an official cutie who she just had to get with. Alexis was kind of impressed but needed another duel from him to see if all that was luck or skill.

 

"Allow me to explain why I showed I got all those bad remarks about me being a terrible duelist. I purposely used a crappy deck in order to see everyone skills. Many of these people were not all that great. Of course, there were those who I learned a lot from. Like Bastion for example." He was now inches from Amaterasu holding a small smile. He stuck out his hand and she grabbed it enthusiastically shaking in congratulatory.

 

"That duel was fantastic," said a hearty booming voice that sounded like Sheppard's. "Like promised as before since you bested our young Amaterasu there, you will not be sent to year one."

 

Everyone started filing out the stadium still awestruck. Jaden just had to duel him and Chazz was beyond pissed at this. Bastion also was eager to duel him and Syrus thought of him as another duelist better than himself. Alexis wanted to duel him as well but she would approach him another day. Right now, she needed to restructure her deck since she now knew he only analyzed her deck. As the last of the stragglers left the duel arena, Jasmine immediately rushed up to where Amaterasu and Atemu were along with Isamu and Mindy behind.

 

"Oh my gosh Atemu, you were so awesome," she said scaring the crap out of him. "I mean, at first I thought you were cute lame duelist with no skills but after this performance I was sooo proven wrong and was wondering if you don't have any plans I mean."

 

Her speech was so fast that he barely understood her. That and her sudden intrusion was really weirding him out. But he allowed her to continue.

 

"No I don't have any plans tomorrow afternoon, what for?"

 

"Well, I was wondering..." She started twiddling her fingers and looked down embarrassed about this. I mean she just ran up to him unannounced and everything. She really hope she didn’t screw up for doing that. "If you would like to hang out tomorrow or something," she finished looking up towards him her face showing embarrassment twisted in it.

 

"Err sure alright," Atemu responded to her in a unsure voice. This was strange. He wasn't one of those cute boys that always have girls after him. Although she seemed weird, this might be nice. He usually didn't have girls wanting to go out with him. Sometimes at all if he was unlucky. "But can I at least know where to meet you after class.

 

She squealed clapping her hands in quick successions. "Meet me at 4pm by the lake by the girls’ dorm after class." She started to walk away and stopped looking back. "Oh and my name is Jasmine," she said winking cutely and continuing her trek back to the dorm. Mindy quickly followed looking behind as she walked also winking, but at Isamu; with a wave and silently saying 'bye cutie.’

 

Atemu and Isamu watched both girls go before turning back towards their friend in confusion. Well one was confused. Isamu only liked the fact that a very cute girl was digging him.

 

"Uh..."

 

"Those girls were Mindy and Jasmine, 2nd year Obelisk girls. They always fall for cute and skill duelists."

 

"Oh," said Atemu

 

"Who cares who they were! They were cute and they were digging us man. I know I'm taking advantage of this moment." Isamu didn’t not noticing Amaterasu huff at his remark. All three of them were all childhood friends. Yet this was bound to happen since they're parents all knew each other. And like Isamu and Atemu, they were all competitive with one another. But Isamu had developed a crush on her but was always too shy to admit to her. That and he didn't want to ruin their friendship. So instead of showing his feelings towards her, he stayed friendly and that was that. They started to walk out and slowly swept across the island.

 

"Nice duel disk Amaterasu. Where did you get it?"

 

"Oh you like it Isamu. Uncle Marik gave it to me as a birthday present. Oh and I heard what happened with your father Atemu. I'm sorry about that."

 

He averted his eyes away from Amaterasu to some other distance. "Don't be sorry. It's not your fault," his voice monotone. "Besides you couldn't have known since you were here?"

 

It became quiet again and they were nearing the lake. So she quickly tried to break the silence. "So you got to tell me. How the heck did you guys get here and how did you get the Blue-Eyes White Dragon?"

 

Atemu looked down smirking. He should have known these questions would come up. He looked up at Amaterasu smirking.

 

"Oh that's a story that will have to be told another." They were now at the girls’ dorm which disappointed her. She really wanted to hear the story behind that one. "Until then, see ya." Both boys walked away with Amaterasu watching them go. She yelled and waved later enthusiastically then turning heel and going inside her dorm. This was indeed going to be a good year

 

Alright folks I know it’s been a while but here it is the first duel of the story, the second chapter. I will have much better duels later on. Just think of this duel as a warm up duel for more to come. I would like to thank my helper The Key Of Hope, who was once known as something else from the fanfiction.net site. I don’t remember honestly since he also deleted all his old Yugioh stories as well. Next up is why I gave Atemu Blue-Eyes a uber card of such. Various reasons. 1 it’s not so uber anymore with all these cards, 2 he thinks it’s the best and 3 there’s a deeper plot that involves that card. Can’t give away the details but I can say it’s worth enough to endure Atemu having such a card. Well Ja Ne

 

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Woah! When I clicked that spoiler I was quite shocked! It's very long' date=' I hope you continue this. I really like it. Congratulations. You have really impressed me.

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Thanks. I appreciate the comment. I have the next chapter been ready even before I posted this chapter. The only thing I'm waiting for is a few more reviews before I post.

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Amazing fan-fic dude. I'm not too fond of GX but you used it quite nicely. Good job Yami-Atemu.

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Thanks. I really don't like 5Ds and I know nothing about it. Though I might put in some syncro cards just for a challenge

 

Don't just bump it! We want more!

I allready sigged this. Just ask people you know to read it. It's great. Everyone will like it!

 

Need two more approving reviews before I post the next one

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