pooppoop1 Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Effect: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card inflicts Battle damage to your opponent's Life Points you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Deck to your side of the field whose ATK is equal to the amount of damage infilcted to the opponents Life Points. When this card is removed from the field except by it's own effect you must Special Summon each Dragon-Type monster in your hand to your side of the field. You take damage equal to half of the combined ATK points of all monsters on your side of the field. As long as this card remains in the Graveyard you get 200 Life Points each time you Summon a Dragon-Type monster. Pic : http://www.testriffic.com/resultfiles/14761Easterns_Fire.jpg I gues i can add this Effect : This card can only be activated when Anzu - The First Dragon Spirit is removed from the field except by it's own effect. When this card is activated you do not lose any Life Points by the effect of Anzu - The First Dragon Spirit. If Anzu - The First Dragon Spirit is in the Graveyard and you have 5 Dragon-Type monster on your field destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field. In addition if you do not have 5 Dragon-Type monsters on your field you must discard your hand to the Graveyard. Pic : http://media.photobucket.com/image/evil%20dragon/dragonblood472/Dragons/CultistsofTiamat.jpg Effect : As long as this card remains face-up on the field Anzu - The First Dragon Spirit doesn't return to your hand by it's own effect. If this card is destroyed you must remove Anzu - the First Dragon Spirit from play. Pic : http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn93/dragonsclaw27/EvilDragon-1.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MjRiku Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 First try at fixing someones card This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned. When this card inflicts Battle damage to your opponent's Life Points you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster whose ATK is equal to the amount coursed from your Deck to your side of the field. When this card is removed from the field except by its own effect you must Special Summon all Dragon-Type monsters in your hand to the field. You take damage equal to the combined ATK of all monsters on your side of the field. I think thats right someone elas can fix it if I'm wrong ____________________________________________ I think the Card is that grteate not keen on the piccy and the effect isnt helpful eought if your going to take alot of damage at the end. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 I don't see many OCG but 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunako Kirishiki Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 I saw only a few OCG errors as MjRiku stated. This effect has some problems :When this card is removed from the field except by it's own effect you must Special Summon each Dragon-Type monster in your hand to the field. You take damage equal to the combined ATK points of all monsters on your side of the field. I suggest reduce the damage taken so it won't easily reduce your LP to 0. Picture is so-so, though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 i have made some changes and took another pick i haven't been on for a while so i don't know if the pic is overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 The pic is slightly overused, but don't worry. There are no major OCG errors that I can see Well done: 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 hm? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MjRiku Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Anzu - The First Dragon SpiritEffect: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card inflicts Battle damage to your opponent's Life Points you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Deck to your side of the filed whos ATK is equal to the amount of damage infilcted to the opponents Life Points. When this card is removed from the field except by it's own effect you must Special Summon each Dragon-Type monster in your hand to your side of the field. You take damage equal to half of the combined ATK points of all monsters on your side of the field. As long as this card remains in the Graveyard you get 200 Life Points each time you Summon a Dragon-Type monster. 5 Dragon AssaultEffect : This card can only be activated when Anzu - The First Dragon Spirit is removed from the field except by it's own effect. When this card is activated you do not lose any Life Points by the effect of Anzu - The First Dragon Spirit. If Anzu - The First Dragon Spirit is in the Graveyard and you have 5 Dragon-Type monster on your field destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field. In addition if you do not have 5 Dragon-Type monsters on your field you must discard your hand to the Graveyard. Decendent of AnzuEffect : As long as this card remains face-up on the field Anzu - The First Dragon Spirit dosen't return to your hand by it's own effect. If this card is destroyed you must remove Anzu - the First Dragon Spirit from play.-----------------------------------------------------------------------I'm not sure about your cards, sometimes they seem OP and sometimes they seem UP. Keep trying anyway. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 thanks for the help man appriciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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