Shatterstar Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 I'm trying to make a new set called "Carnival of Illusions." These are the first cards in the set. They are more than likely filled with OCG errors which i would like help with. Go easy on the rating, i made them in about 10 min. Image Cred. goes to deviantART. Jaruzi's Lore:When this card comes into play, you may search your deck for any Magic or Trap card that has "Jaruzi" its name and place it in your hand. The deck is then shuffled. If the card you chose is "Jaruzi's Spinning Wheel of Doom" you may not activate it in the turn in which this effect is played. Thanks for viewing/commenting!any comments/corrections? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazar The Nightmare King Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Very good, pictures are well used. I don't see any thing wrong with the ocg at all. I give them a 10/10. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shatterstar Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 thanks man, just wait till you see Jaruzi's Spinning Wheel of Doom" havent got the kinks worked out just yet but it will be awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 8/10 1 OGC and spelling error. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shatterstar Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 oops! noticed the spelling error, sorry! thanks for the great rating! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 [align=center]Obsidian Ratings[spoiler=Mouroki the Maniacal Clown](OCG Fix)Once per turn, flip a coin. If heads, you may search your Deck for a monster with "Clown" or "Circus" in it's name and add it to your hand. If tails, switch this card's battle position and you take 200 damage. (Grading)Picture - 1/2OCG - 1/2Usefulness - 2/2Balance - 1/2 Total - 5/8Grade - B- (Review)Lovely.....a clown. I hate clowns...... Your OCG for this card is off a bit. Lucky for you, I am the OCG teacher for YCM's Duel Academy. So if you ever need help with card making, just send me a message. The picture scares me. I was expecting more.....Peten the Clown type pics. This card's "drawback" isn't always a drawback. Because if Mr. Clowny here is already in Defense Position, the Drawback turns into a good thing. Especially if it was affected by cards like "Stumbling" or "Zero Gravity". [spoiler=Clown Child](OCG Fix)FLIP: Destroy 1 face-up monster on the field. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you may select 1 "Clown" monster in your Graveyard, except "Clown Child" and Special Summon it. (Grading)Picture - 1/2OCG - 1/2Usefulness - 2/2Balance - 1.5/2 Total - 5.5/8Grade - B (Review)A baby clown? Oh lord...... those clowns waste no time do they? OCG isn't all that bad on this one. Just a few touch ups. Picture...again....scares me. Clowns.....*Hides in a corner* This card is actually very useful. Monster Nuke + Revival. Only thing really hurting it is that it's a FLIP monster. Those aren't very welcomed in this day and age of Yugimonz. Ugh....see what I said in my PM dude? My attention span has been spent. I'll finish rating the others later on. Check back to this post from time to time k? Good looking so far.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shatterstar Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 thanks. changed the card effects. will post the corrected cards soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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