Skarlet Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 [align=center] http://i40.tinypic.com/f9hb7o.jpg http://i41.tinypic.com/4hxcw3.jpg http://i41.tinypic.com/1z4xzlt.jpg When a WATER monster you control attacks your opponent directly, you can remove this card from play to increase the ATK of the attacking monster by 1000. When a WATER monster other then this card is removed from play you can Special Summon this card from your removed from play pile in Attack Position. http://i362.photobucket.com/albums/oo63/whiteblackwolf_2_7_95/rouge/bellydaner2.jpg[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Good imagery, OCG Errors but cool lores.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 I'd appricate it if you would actually point those errors out, part of the reason I made this set was to improve my OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Understood. but sorry, there are missing words like "a" and you capitalize "that" and stuff after a comma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Actually, I think you're mistaken on capitalisation after commas but the other shall be fixed. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 My bad, I did capitalise after commas, editing underway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Alright, good luck fixing that OCG! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Editing done...ages ago... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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