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Exyst' date=' I think the lighting is on the middle pretty much.

Text is bad.

The bottom left effect seems like a clipping mask, that's out of place.

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Actually, now I look, its left middle. Chest is too bright, and if that's the intended light source, then it's wrong, if you look at the focal's shadows.

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Your lightsource should be chosen more wisely because we will mostly look at it.

Your compo needs work. Far left seems weird a bit.

Too messy man, You should have cleaner effects a bit.

Remove the text imo.

 

Not bad though.

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You should sig it' date=' if only because your venom sig is really, really creepy and bad. This is nothing great, but better than that.

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NO!

I LOVE VENOM!

lol

You're probably right.

 

and, thanks Omni (-.- is omni right?) for the first good CnC I got here

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