god dragon lords

[josh = jaden]

this is my first attempt at some cards so im open to criticism and if the ocg is a bit bad i apolagise and ill change it just give them a rating

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope you like

[OrcMan321]

I like the ideas youve done, (Divine beasts should be in other cards {But whos here to care})

Your OCG is good, just need to remember where the capitals are. I think the atk is a bit high considering what they can do, maybe make it 3200. Also Dark dragons effect needs to state *Until end of Battle Phase* just so he doesnt stay at 4000, however make it his atk 3000 or somin

[General Assclown]

Cool! Nice Pics 2! A few spelling mistakes though

[Max Darkness]

These are okay, but the effects are very similar. Try some variety. I've tried to correct the OCG as it appears now.

 

A few thoughts:

 

For all the cards, you've written 'dragon' in the type box. Change to 'Dragon'.

 

Craydon:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 EARTH monsters. If you have no cards in your hand you may destroy all face-up Spell and Trap cards on the field. You can only use this effect once per duel."

 

Excelsior:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 WIND monsters. If you have no cards in your hand you may inflict 1500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent. You can only use this effect once per duel."

(I changed the damage amount because 2000 LP is a lot of Life Points)

 

Lucifer:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 LIGHT monsters. If you have no cards in your hand you may gain 1500 Life Points. You can only use this effect once per duel."

(Amount of LP changed for the same reason)

 

Metradon:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 DARK monsters. If you have no cards in your hand you may increase the ATK of this card by 2000 during your Battle Phase. You can only use this effect once per duel."

 

Hydralux:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 WATER monsters. If you have no cards in your hand you may add 10 cards from your Graveyard to your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled. You can only use this effect once per duel."

 

Elohim:

i) The most overused picture on YCM.

ii) Don't make DIVINE monsters, change it to LIGHT.

iii) The effect is far too similar to "The Winged Dragon of Ra".

iv) Come up with a new effect.

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play "Craydon...", "Excelsior...", "Lucifer...", "Metradon..." and "Hydrolux...". (New effect here).