keroro card

[HanZ_B 23125700]

this is my keroro card set:)

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[Exa Raiun]

Some advices:

1. Don't use attachments. On the card maker, click on the completed card, it gives you a link, which can be copied into your post.

2. Unless it's really unavoidable (which is not the case here), don't make up Types. It can be confusing, considering there is already an "Alien" archetype in the game.

 

And some corrections:

Keroro:

When this monster is Summoned, you can add 1 "Giroro" card from your Deck to your hand. As long as you control a "Giroro", "Tamama", "Dororo" or "Kururu" card, this monster cannot be attacked.

 

Giroro:

When this monster is Summoned, you can add 1 "Tamama" from your Deck to your hand. Increase the Battle Damage inflicted by this card by 500 for each Equip Spell Card equipped to this monster. As long as you control a "Keroro", "Tamama", "Dororo" or "Kururu" card, increase the ATK of this card by 500. If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this monster from your hand.

 

Tamama:

When this monster is Summoned, you can add 1 "Dororo" from your Deck to your hand. As long as you control a "Keroro", "Giroro", "Dororo" or "Kururu" card, this monster can attack twice during the same Battle Phase.

 

Dororo:

When this monster is Summoned, you can add 1 "Kururu" from your Deck to your hand. As long as you control a "Keroro", "Giroro", "Tamama" or "Kururu" card, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.

 

Kururu:

When this monster is Summoned, you can add 1 "Keroro" from your Deck to your hand. As long as you control a "Keroro", "Giroro", "Tamama" or "Dororo" card, increase the ATK and DEF of face-up Alien-Type you control by 100 during your Standby Phase.

 

Keroro Platoon:

Activate the effect of this card only if your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters. Your Life Points become 100. Special Summon as many "Keroro", "Giroro", "Tamama", "Dororo" and "Kururu" cards as possible from your hand, Deck or Graveyard.

 

While your OCG needs clearing, your ideas are actually not bad. You seemed to be inspired by cards like the "Gadget" monsters, the "Six Samurai" monsters and some more. The last card seems to be a modified version of "Hysteric Party". If you correct the mistakes and get rid of the attachment format, I'll rate these cards.

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sigh* dont use attachments

[Mizuku Kagirinai]

Don't use attachments. I refuse to rate until they are posted normally. You can do this by clicking the actual card once it is created on the Card Maker, and once it finishes uploading, you simply take the code and paste it into a post. Voila.

[LiAM]

Aaaah!

 

Is it me - or since I kinda left - the card maker is making cards really small?

 

'Cos I can barely see these.