Jeroukoo Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Warlock is one of my friends. He wanted to make this set. So he made one card and helped with most of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 [align=center]1. The OCG is meh. 2. Most pictures fail.3. You've posted some cards twice4. Dragons generally fail unless made properly5. You're a 4 star who has made 218 cards. I expected better. Altogether: 3.5/10[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 bad and overused images^^your spell images sucks and the 2. card why there is a white border??you post 2 card twice...bad ocg.. Fail/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Not being rude, but you're a four-star and these cards look like they came from a one-star. I suggest you read the OCG thread here or go onto the Yu-Gi-Oh Wikia to brush up on your OCG skills. Dragon from Below:"This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "The Dark Eye". This card cannot be destroyed if there is another face-up DARK Dragon-Type monster on the field. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard." Fire Dragon Lv.10:i) If it's a Lv.10, then make it a Lv.10!ii) The ATK and DEF need to be increased.iii) The picture needs its border to be cropped.iv) "(See "Armed Dragon Lv.10"'s effect and substitute this card's name). During your Battle Phase, you may destroy 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field. Inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the destroyed monster's Level x 100." Fire Dragon Lv.3:i) Not the best pic. Could be better.ii) "When this card is Normal Summoned, inflict 300 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. (See "Armed Dragon Lv.3"'s effect and substitute this card's name)." Ice Dragon:i) Stupidly overpowered effect. Can't attack for 5 turns?! Change it now.ii) The picture's awful. Koru Doragon:i) Don't make Vanillas.ii) Give it an effect.iii) "Heckish"? Do you mean 'Hellish'? Lightning Dragon:i) Slightly overused pic.ii) "This card is also treated as a Thunder-Type monster. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Thunder-Type monster from your Deck." The Dark Eye:i) Such a bad picture.ii) "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Dragon from Below". You must offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 7 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. Undead Dragon:i) "This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except be removing from play 1 Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard. Oncer per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can remove from play a Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard." I've made some changes to the effects, mainly because I think they fit better with a dragon deck.Work on your card-making skills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 i thought it was a lvl 10 why is it a level 7?? 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Pic are bad, OCG errors, some cards are vanilas 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeroukoo Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 I told you most of these card iseas were made by my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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