dimon Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Ok so this is my first card When this card is sent from the Field to the Graveyard destroy a monster on your opponents side of the field. would appreciate any constructive criticism (Especially on my OCG) credit for pic: http://www.freewebs.com/foxfeather/thedragons.htm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 A little op'd, you left out a comma, and your card set is backwards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 [align=center]Gah! Why don't noobs understand that Blue Eyes is long dead?Picture is already used.Effect is worded wrong.field not Field.Effect is too simple.4/10[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Effect is too simple.4/10[/align][/size] Nothing is wrong with simple effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruann Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 humm, ocg is meeh, the picture is good, name ok...change the "0001-BGNR" for "BGNR-EN001" 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windowlicker Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 [align=center]Effect is too simple.4/10[/align] Nothing is wrong with simple effects. [align=center]In the TCG' date=' no.In YCM, yes, there is a problem with simple card effects. It shows that you put no effort into your cards. If you want to make cards for fun, make them for fun and enjoy them on your own.[/align'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 overused imagebad OCG4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shonen Jump™ Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 pic is overused simple effect Field= field worded wrong so on, so on... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimon Posted May 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 I think i fixed some problems here um where would you get pics that are not used. I understand, that Google images is not good. In regards to effect i wanted balance i.e. not to give it a cheap one. I want to start of with something simple and then make more complex effects. Thanks for feedback everybody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Dark ultimate dragon is reeeeeeeally good well done 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 hey ...that kinda look like my nightshroud dragon.... look at this link~~! 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dimon Posted May 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Thank you @chizuruotohime apparantly everyone uses that image nice cards btw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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