AlickimenT Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 This is probably some of my best work.Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. Remove from play all cards in your Graveyard to negate the attack and Special Summon 1 "Rainbow Dread Warrior" from your hand. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Rainbow Summoning". This card is treated as a DARK, WATER, FIRE and EARTH monster. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to destroy 1 face-up Attack Position monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card you control to negate the effect of a Effect Monster and remove it from play. When this cards effect is activated, place 1 Rainbow Counter on this card (max. 3). During your Standby Phase, you can remove 3 Rainbow Counters from this card to inflict 700 damage to your opponent. When your opponents Life Points are reduced to 2000 or lower with this cards effect, Place 1 Secondary Counter on this card (max. 1). Once per turn, you can remove 1 Secondary Counter from this card to Special Summon any "Token" monster from your Deck to the field. IMAGE CREDIT: Marvel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Fix: This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Rainbow Summoning". This card is also treated as a DARK, WATER, FIRE, and EARTH monster. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to destroy 1 face-up Attack Position monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card you control to negate the effect of an Effect Monster and remove it from play. When this effect is activated, place 1 Rainbow Counter on this card (max. 3). During your Standby Phase, you can remove 3 Rainbow Counters from this card to inflict 700 damage to your opponent. When your opponent's Life Points become 2000 or less by this effect, place 1 Secondary Counter on this card (max. 1). Once per turn, you can remove 1 Secondary Counter from this card to Special Summon a "Token" monster from your Deck to the field.______________________________________________________ You should probably change the "Token" monster to a certain token with it's stats in the effect, because "Token" monsters aren't allowed in decks (or are illegal in decks, anyway). Ex: "Rainbow Token" (Warrior-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) The 1st card could possibly be abusable at times. It could be in your hand at the start of the duel. You use it and you have nothing to lose because nothing is in your graveyard. You might want to consider adding a card minimum for the number of cards that have to be in your graveyard in order to use the card. Maybe a better condition for the summoning of "Rainbow Dread Warrior". It'll also make "Rainbow Dread Warrior" a little more balanced too. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlickimenT Posted May 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Thanks for proffesional overlook :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted May 31, 2009 Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Token Monster? Token Monsters don't go in your Deck; they aren't actual cards, so the last effect doesn't work. Plus the 700 Life Points thing seems poitnless, make it 1000 at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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