Static Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 By Maxwell Fraser I hope you understand what fear is before you have to feel it.I hope neurosis don't rub off on you.I hope you always have enough to eat.I hope you're never bullied.And I hope you never bully others.I hope you find love.I hope you don't die before your time.I hope you don't blame yourself for things that are not your fault.I hope you're always playing your tape and I hope you'll visit me when I'm old.I hope you are true to yourself.I hope that rejection doesn't stop you loving.I hope you never experience war. I hope you outlive your parents.I hope you never bury your children.I don't mind whether you're a boy or a girl, I just want you to be healthy.I hope we enjoy every minute of you growing up.I hope you lead your world to victory. A drop in the oceanA second and all timeOne stop in the endless sky One tiny linkIn an endless chain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 And you plan to do what by putting this on YCM where half of the people won't be able to read the small font to start with? The poem is pretty nice though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomboi Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 By Maxwell Fraser I hope you understand what fear is before you have to feel it.I hope neurosis don't rub off on you.I hope you always have enough to eat.I hope you're never bullied. Stopped reading right here because you weren't making fun of someone else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 It's a pretty good poem. Well written. By Maxwell Fraser I hope you understand what fear is before you have to feel it.I hope neurosis don't rub off on you.I hope you always have enough to eat.I hope you're never bullied. Stopped reading right here because you weren't making fun of someone else GTFO! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 And you plan to do what by putting this on YCM where half of the people won't be able to read the small font to start with? The poem is pretty nice though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Culpa Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 And you plan to do what by putting this on YCM where half of the people won't be able to read the small font to start with? The poem is pretty nice though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 By Maxwell Fraser I hope you understand what fear is before you have to feel it.I hope neurosis don't rub off on you.I hope you always have enough to eat.I hope you're never bullied. Stopped reading right here because you weren't making fun of someone else Warned. +10%. Oh, and the next person to continue that quote pyramid will be warned too. C'mon guys... /: -glassberry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 Oddly... cryptic hardly seems the right word, but I can't find one specific enough to describe my emotions while reading this. One has to wonder the conditions under which you wrote it, and your motivation for doing so. also, in before someone does a cool story bro. Sadly enough, it's probaly going to happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowwolf17 Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 *Sniff* That is touching. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 The name of the author immediately discounts the fact that you're the girl in your avvie. Otherwise, I actually like it. Not as bad as some of the other sentimental sh!t I've seen other places. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 The name of the author immediately discounts the fact that you're the girl in your avvie. Otherwise' date=' I actually like it. Not as bad as some of the other sentimental sh!t I've seen other places. :/[/quote'] Umm... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maxi_Jazz As much as I wish I was, I'm not a member of Faithless. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Oddly... cryptic hardly seems the right word' date=' but I can't find one specific enough to describe my emotions while reading this. One has to wonder the conditions under which you wrote it, and your motivation for doing so. also, in before someone does a cool story bro. Sadly enough, it's probaly going to happen.[/quote'] He didn't write it >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 By Maxwell Fraser I hope you understand what fear is before you have to feel it.I hope neurosis don't rub off on you.I hope you always have enough to eat.I hope you're never bullied.And I hope you never bully others.I hope you find love.I hope you don't die before your time.I hope you don't blame yourself for things that are not your fault.I hope you're always playing your tape and I hope you'll visit me when I'm old.I hope you are true to yourself.I hope that rejection doesn't stop you loving.I hope you never experience war. I hope you outlive your parents.I hope you never bury your children.I don't mind whether you're a boy or a girl' date=' I just want you to be healthy.I hope we enjoy every minute of you growing up.I hope you lead your world to victory. A drop in the oceanA second and all timeOne stop in the endless sky One tiny linkIn an endless chain[/size'] Only the last two stanzas really appealed to me.. The rest seemed very boring and lacked alot of flow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 [quote='Careless Whisper' pid='2276031' dateline='1243957483'] [quote='Static' pid='2269840' dateline='1243843260'] [i][size=x-small] By Maxwell Fraser I hope you understand what fear is before you have to feel it. I hope neurosis don't rub off on you. I hope you always have enough to eat. I hope you're never bullied. And I hope you never bully others. I hope you find love. I hope you don't die before your time. I hope you don't blame yourself for things that are not your fault. I hope you're always playing your tape and I hope you'll visit me when I'm old. I hope you are true to yourself. I hope that rejection doesn't stop you loving. I hope you never experience war. I hope you outlive your parents. I hope you never bury your children. I don't mind whether you're a boy or a girl, I just want you to be healthy. I hope we enjoy every minute of you growing up. I hope you lead your world to victory. A drop in the ocean A second and all time One stop in the endless sky One tiny link In an endless chain[/size][/i] [/quote] Only the last two stanzas really appealed to me.. The rest seemed very boring and lacked alot of flow. [/quote] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0EYQ9b1slo http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Evce758BBY8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BehindTheMask Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 I really liked it. It was pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 By Maxwell Fraser I hope you understand what fear is before you have to feel it.I hope neurosis don't rub off on you.I hope you always have enough to eat.I hope you're never bullied.And I hope you never bully others.I hope you find love.I hope you don't die before your time.I hope you don't blame yourself for things that are not your fault.I hope you're always playing your tape and I hope you'll visit me when I'm old.I hope you are true to yourself.I hope that rejection doesn't stop you loving.I hope you never experience war. I hope you outlive your parents.I hope you never bury your children.I don't mind whether you're a boy or a girl' date=' I just want you to be healthy.I hope we enjoy every minute of you growing up.I hope you lead your world to victory. A drop in the oceanA second and all timeOne stop in the endless sky One tiny linkIn an endless chain[/size'] Only the last two stanzas really appealed to me.. The rest seemed very boring and lacked alot of flow. Could have mentioned that they were lyrics, then it would have made much more sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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