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Well, the OCG on the card makes it sound a bit wrong. I think it's more appropriate to say: When you control at least 1 Face-up Fire Attribute monster, all battle damage you would take is Halved.

 

Other than that, I think the card is pretty nice =D I really like the effect, but shouldn't have some kind of maintenance cost? Or you could reduce the effect to only applying when fire monsters you control battles, or something.

 

But overall, I think this card is pretty nice =)

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Correct OCG

All battle damage is halved. If you control no FIRE monster, destroy this card. If this card is destroyed, except by it's own effect, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your deck.

 

The art is very nice, but in my opinion, it'd represent a monster. But oh well, that doesn't really matter.

The effect can be handy, but I don't really see any strategies with it.

Compliments that you made a Continuous Trap that isn't worthless, because it replaces itself when killed.

 

8,7634/10

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Correct OCG

All battle damage is halved. If you control no FIRE monsters' date=' destroy this card. If this card is destroyed, except by it's own effect, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your [b']D[/b]eck.

 

The art is very nice, but in my opinion, it'd represent a monster. But oh well, that doesn't really matter.

The effect can be handy, but I don't really see any strategies with it.

Compliments that you made a Continuous Trap that isn't worthless, because it replaces itself when killed.

 

8,7634/10

Bolded bit is things I fixed (OCG).

Simple effect, the pic is overused.

5/10 try to make more long complicated effects, and the pic is overused.

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