pokeboy2009 Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 These are cards I put Together over the winter because the indian mythology creature I based them around is usually sighted in the winter. Please Rate :D:as well the triops are actual creatures as oposed to the wendigo which is notPLEASE NO BAD LANGUAGE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 Overall, these aren't very good I'm afraid. Let me point out some of the bigger errors: i) Work on your OCG big time.ii) Some cards have been posted twice.iii) Most of the pictures are terrible (especially the cloud ones), one doesn't even have a picture.iv) Fossil isn't a type; use Rock-Type instead.v) Make some effect monsters...so many vanillas.vi) "Destructo Charger" should be an Equip Spell Card, the image isn't great and your OCG is off by miles. Work on it!vii) Feed n' Frenzy is not the right phrase. It is "Feeding Frenzy".viii) "Ice Fang of Death"'s image doesn't fit the name or the effect.ix) "Ice Storm" has no purpose.x) "Ice Ultima"'s ATK and DEF are noobishly overpowered (5000 is the maximum)xi) "King Wendigo" has 4500 ATK and is a Lv.7...Lv.7 is below Blue-Eyes. ie. > 3000 ATK. You've made a Lv.12.xii) Tuner monsters have the word Tuner instead of Effect, not as well as.xiii) Re-work "River Sanctuary"xiv) "Royal Guard of the Wendigo" is a Level 6, but can outgun a Lv.9. Change it's ATK and DEF.xv) No offense, but your "Triop" cards are some of the worst I've ever seen.xvi) Defence Mode should be Defence Positionxvii) If you have an effect Synchro Monster, have 'Effect' written on it.xviii) "Wendigo Lv.10"'s effect is overpowered and it's a Lv.11xix) "Wendigo Lv.2" is a Lv.3 for some reason.xx) "Wendigo Lv.4" is a Lv.5 for some reason.xxi) "Wendigo Lv.6" is a Lv.7 for some reason.xxii) "Wendigo Lv.8" is a Lv.9 for some reason.xxiii) Surely all "Wendigo" monsters would be Beast-Type not Aqua-Type? Recommendations:- Read the OCG thread on this site- Visit Yu-Gi-Oh Wikia and learn from there- Go to other threads and pick up card-making tips from the replies- Improve your card making skills...and quickly Rating: 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeboy2009 Posted June 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 ok i see where your going with the triop cards, those i just made cuz i was bored. I know the ocg was WAYYYY off but i did that because i hadnt seen the other ocg posts. ill fix most of the mistakes you mentioned but on river sanctuary i have to disagree. I made destructo charger a quick-play so you could play it in a pinch and yeah i will fix the ocg. oh and i know the cloud thing stinks those were just cuz i was bored. oh and i did aqua because they are more ice than beast and i did fossil because i thought it would go well and i know its not a type. oh and levels don't have to go by 2's ive actually seen a real level card that goes by tens. oh and the posted twice was a mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 What I was saying about the level cards is that for example, it was called Wendigo Lv.2, but it was actually a level 3 on the card. That is what I wanted you to fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeboy2009 Posted June 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 oh i see ok ill fix itok i fixed the stuff you said and the triops and clouds, just ignore them because i only put them on so it could have afew more cards, i'd takem off if i couldhey max darkness, i checked out your profile and i like pokemon too but digimon, not so much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 I could kinda guess by the name 'Pokeboy'... Houndoom is God!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake Harper Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 not bad just dont post normal monsters good anyway 8/10if you are bored then dont make cards that doesnt works NEVER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 i like some of them, but some are just wrong.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mech king Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Bad OCG, Bad pictures, unrealistic.12/20 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Just for giggles, I'm going to say "these suck" over and over again: THESE SUCK THESE SUCK THESE SUCK THESE SUCK THESE SUCK THESE SUCK THESE SUCK Get the message? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaidesgen5 Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 No. 3/10 I respect your interests, but artistically unrelated OCG, bad OCG, and OP'd cards DO NOT MIX. What the hell are triops anyway? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 llook, these need some serious work. the ocg is terrible, some of th pictures don't even go with the card, and i've seen this same thread twice. i saw it about two weeks ago. spammer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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