karasu45 Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Here's my first card :p note it /10thx alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murch Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 It's Ok, needs work on the effect, which in the game would be "This card's effect may only be activated once per duel. You may choose one monster on the field. That monster may not attack, change positions, or be used as a tribute for three turns." your effect is more like a lore for a normal monster. since it is a dark wisard, the attribute should be dark and type should be the "intherealgame" spellcaster. A bit OP, should be level 5 or 6. Nice pic! 6.xyzdraoncannon/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlixeTiir Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 the effect would sound better as a description, because it says "when he activates his mana hand", which offers no specific guidance, however the art, ATK, DEF, and idea are good, im no ocg expert but lemme show you some better ocg(original card grammar): Select 1 Monster, the Selected Monster cannot Change Battle Position or Attack For 3 of its Controller's Turns, You may Activate this Effect Once per Main Phase, Every Turn. did that help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PowerlinX Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 I like the idea, but just as killermurch said, the OCG is wrong. Since you are new, OCG means Official Card Grammar. The effect should be what killermurch had. It is also a little overpowered. The attribute should "Dark" and the type should be "Spellcaster" 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karasu45 Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 thank you i gonna work on it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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