Dark Dragon Card

[Jesse Sigmon]

[Max Darkness]

Not very good in a number of ways I'm afraid:

 

i) The name is so unimaginative

ii) It's level is too low

iii) The picture is blurry

iv) If it's a Gemini, give it a Gemini effect; this is an Effect monster

v) A Lv.4 that cannot be destroyed and doesn't need a LP cost to sustain it...stupidly overpowered.

vi) "Dark" should be DARK

vii) 'the graveyard' should be "your Graveyard."

viii) Work on your OCG.

[.:n00b King:.]

Its severely OPed, try lowering the ATK and DEF quite a bit. Also, it cannot be a Gemini because even though it says it is you should put "This card is treated as a Normal"... etc. onthe card so people know that it really is a Gemini.

[Jesse Sigmon]

Thanks for the reply, I'm new to this whole thing so I pretty much don't know what I'm doing. A friend of mine is helping me with this

[Max Darkness]

Thanks for the reply' date=' I'm new to this whole thing so I pretty much don't know what I'm doing. A friend of mine is helping me with this

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If you need any more help, just PM me.