Dfantasia Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 Hi I'm new at this site so I hope you enjoy my cards. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 It's an alright effort, but the effect is a bit confusing and has bits it doesn't need: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 DARK monsters on your side of the field (where did you come up with their levels equalling 5 when this is a level 10 monster?). This card loses 250 ATK (500 ATK is a lot to lose) for every Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard. (There's no need for the whole "If this card attacks your opponent...) Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you may pay 1000 Life Points. If you do, this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase." Possible Changes:i) The name's a bit clumsy, so try and shorten it.ii) Crop the picture so the dragon takes up more of the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted June 4, 2009 Report Share Posted June 4, 2009 Nice card for a new member well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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