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Rise Of The Villains


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Im afraid to tell you, your cards are horrible. The first one has horrible OCG, and its effect is OVP. As for the rest of your cards, they just have bad OCG and your Fusion is probably the worst. No offense meant through this. And if you want to correct, just tell me. I'll be going through this thread constantly to look at these.

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Heres some things to correct:

 

On the First card, say that by removing it from play, you can destroy "1" monster that your opponent Normal Summons or Special Summons.

 

On the Second card, get rid of union and put effect.

 

On the Third card, simply put that when you control a face-up Pollution Villain monster, you can special summon this card.

 

On the Fourth card, by his looks, he should be a level 6, with about the 1900 ATK and 2300 DEF.

 

On the Fifth card, just correct the Grammar and its fine.

 

On the Sixth card, Its perfect, dont worry.

 

On the Seventh card, The Fusion monster, state that when this monster is successfully Fusion Summoned, you may discard up to 3 cards from your hand to destroy cards on your opponents side of the field, equal to the number of cards you discarded.

 

On the Eighth card, instead of send, put, "You may return 1 "Pollution Villain" monster from your Graveyard to your Deck, then shuffle your Deck.

 

On the Ninth Card, Its fine, but make it a 3 star.

 

On the Tenth card, State that you have to pay half your lifepoints, to make it fair to your opponent. And also, change the name to Dark and Light Rivalry, not Rivality.

 

On the Eleventh card, have it say, when your opponent declares an attack on a face-up Pollution Villain monster you control, discard 1 card, and destroy the attacking monster.

 

On the Twelfth and final card, fix up the grammar.

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OCG! Spelling! Balance! Consistency! Good Pics!

 

By your powers combined, I am...

 

not this set. 3/10.

 

Honestly, Mermaid Warrior and Enraged Guardian look like they'd be fighting AGAINST Pollution Villains, not for them.

 

I think Yugioh Pro said the rest already.

 

Prevent crappy card pollution. THE POWER IS YOURS!

 

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Im afraid to tell you' date=' your cards are horrible. The first one has horrible OCG, and its effect is OVP. As for the rest of your cards, they just have bad OCG and your Fusion is probably the worst. No offense meant through this. And if you want to correct, just tell me. I'll be going through this thread constantly to look at these.

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i agree

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