Prada Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Text is ugly and random. >.< Suggestions accepted. Not totally finished with it, just kind of stuck. [spoiler=V1] [spoiler=V2] [spoiler=Vert Tag version, out of interest] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 The Text is ~ok~,I like it overall,If the White-whispy things were a bit more faded.... I don't know though....Hmmm.... I do like this though. By the way, your Sig-with-the-Doctor is totally awesome too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted June 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 The Text is ~ok~' date='I like it overall,If the White-whispy things were a bit more faded.... I don't know though....Hmmm.... I do like this though. By the way, your Sig-with-the-Doctor is totally awesome too.[/quote'] Whispy things are rain. xD That tag was a gyft from Careless Whisper. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Joker FTWthe pentooling would be better if it was more faded at the end IMOThe text is...mehOverall it is pretty nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Tbh, I don't really buy the rain effect. It technically should work, but for me it looks too much like a holo =/. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 I agree with the swiss, make it fade out a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Seems more like a photo manip... But still looks good. A little choppy. Maybe blur the choppy parts... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Doesn't blend in well imo.I would say focus the lightning on the middle. Darken the side & add some solid colors mate.Make the text stylish. Not 1 font. 3 fonts & sizes over each other or placed next/below etc.kiu though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 I think you just turned the Joker into Gambit with this. :P I do agree with fading the pentooling a bit and smudge so that it looks more like fire. The contrast between the Render and the BG don't match each other. Adding a bit of contrast to the BG could help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Light swirl is good but it looks random and odd. Light source at his feet is weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Weren't you leaving? Also, I like the light swirl, it helps the focal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted June 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Light swirl is good but it looks random and odd. Light source at his feet is weird. Light source is good IMO. =P The pentool wasn't made to look fire' date=' but I'll give it a try. ='] The text is a quite from my favorite song. The concept was partially to make the Joker look like he's standing over Gotham or somewhere, planning his next attempt at power and the death of Batman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Much better mate. Just add more light on the places that you think the pen tooling is showing on ;) Then it'll be magnificent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 I shall do that. =D Anymore comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 V2 ftw. I love vertical tags too. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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