DarkTails Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 I wanted this to be a realistic card, I mean, there are real cards that say stuff like "shake your opponent's hand, if they refuse blah blah...", so why not this? But I'll try it out in this section first :] "When your opponent plays a card, make a wild gesture towards him/her and shout, "BOOM!" If your opponent flinches, negate the activation of the spell/trap card or the summon (of any kind) of the monster. They must also discard their entire hand. If your opponent does not flinch, you lose 2000 life points and this card stays on the field for the remainder of the duel. This card cannot be countered, it cannot be chained-to, and is unaffected by any other card's effect." I think it needs some rewording, any suggestions? Lol, imagine playing this card in real-life, at least it'll liven up a boring duel. Also, if your opponent doesn't flinch, the card stays on the field to waste a spell/trap zone so you can be reminded of how stupid it was to play the card xD Oh yeah, I should probably add this line to the end: "You cannot play this card if your opponent has a pacemaker. (Ask them before you play this card)" I'll probably tweak this card to use in my Pirate Deck. Here's a link to the Photobucket Album with all the cards I made so far, with no pics so no one gets mad. http://s104.photobucket.com/albums/m178/nightmareparallax/Yugioh%20Cards/NoPics/ The Pirate deck is based around stockpiling "Cannonball Counters" to use for various effects, but mainly to damage Life Points directly. Also, a healthy dose of sneaky Traps and many Coin-flip cards to add a sense of danger to your strategy. It's just fun to play, hopefully lol. I think I'll add some swarming effects, like lots of little Pirate Grunts or Pirate Tokens can be summoned to use as cannon-fodder. I mean that literally, maybe some effects that let you turn the weak monsters in Cannonball Counters to do some more damage, see Red Scourge to see what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earthbound Ojamortal! Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Not Bad, 7/10, But Make the Life points 1000, Or Know 1 would play it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mech king Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 your OCG is off by a little, nice picture, every thing is filled out except circulation so i'll assume it's a second edition, the effect is a little unbalanced.So it's a pretty good card 12/20 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 your OCG is off by a little' date=' nice picture, every thing is filled out except circulation so i'll assume it's a second edition, the effect is a little unbalanced.So it's a pretty good card 12/20[/quote'] wouldnt it be more simple to say 6/10but agreed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnailFace11 Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 It's funny I would use it cause I make wild gestures anyways.......now u give it reason. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkTails Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 your OCG is off by a little' date=' nice picture, every thing is filled out except circulation so i'll assume it's a second edition, the effect is a little unbalanced.So it's a pretty good card 12/20[/quote'] Cool, but how do I fix it? I think I should lower the life-point damage to 1500 or something, because 2000 is sounding rough, like Ojamortal said lol. I'm reading through the grammar thread, and it's sort of helping :P Yeah, I don't care about serial numbers or circulation, I'm making a realistic (balanced) Pirate deck and printing them out to play with people for fun. I'd post the cards (I have a dozen so far), but I don't want to get yelled at for not crediting people (this card has a stock photo). It's funny I would use it cause I make wild gestures anyways.......now u give it reason. 9/10 Exactly! :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dfantasia Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Love that card!!! Everyone I play flinches when I play them... lol!!! I would SO make that card!9.999999999998/10...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkTails Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Here's a link to the Photobucket Album with all the cards I made so far, with no pics so no one gets mad. http://s104.photobucket.com/albums/m178/nightmareparallax/Yugioh%20Cards/NoPics/ The Pirate deck is based around stockpiling "Cannonball Counters" to use for various effects, but mainly to damage Life Points directly. Also, a healthy dose of sneaky Traps and many Coin-flip cards to add a sense of danger to your strategy. It's just fun to play, hopefully lol. I think I'll add some swarming effects, like lots of little Pirate Grunts or Pirate Tokens can be summoned to use as cannon-fodder. I mean that literally, maybe some effects that let you turn the weak monsters in Cannonball Counters to do some more damage, see Red Scourge to see what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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