Unicorn cards-my first cards ever!!!!!

[R@inbow]

hey there my first cards i ever made...hope they are not that bad...

 

comment plz.....

 

[Felix Culpa]

Fake Type = Thumbs down. 5/10. Anyway, in the Field Card, it would be Unicorn-Type

[PANDORUM™]

Welcome to YCM

 

Lets see what i can say:

The pics are Not bad for your first.

Unicorn isnt a real type change it to Beast.

No ID.

No card maker name.

The first cards effect doesnt make sense what is a attribute advantage( i think i know what your talking about but that isnt a real way of playing in the game)

The second monsters effect is all wrong it should be like this

Aslong as this card is on the field all DARK monsters on your side of the field cannot be destroyed by LIGHT monsters.

The monsters arnt overpowered just mixed.

The first spell doesnt make much sense.

And the second spell is ok but a bit simple.

 

not much else to say but good job on these cards and not using attachments.

a rating of 7.3/10

[mech king]

your OCG is off by a little, unicorn is not a real type,good pictures, effects are a little unbalanced.I give them a 12/20

[Max Darkness]

Good images, but v. poor OCG and effects.

Also, don't make fake types; make these Beast-Type or Winged-Beast-Types.

 

Lazarus:

i) This card's effect makes no sense. What are you referring to when you say "Elemental advantages"?

ii) When you answer this, I can give you more help.

 

Everlasting Fight:

i) This should be a Counter Trap Card, not a Normal Spell Card.

ii) OCG:

Activate only when a face-up LIGHT "Unicorn" monster on your side of the field is attacked by a DARK monster on your opponents side of the field. (Effect changed because otherwise it is extremely limited) Flip a coin and call it. If you call it right, the attack is negated and all "Unicorn" monsters on your side of the field gain half the ATK of the attacking monster until your End Phase.

 

Negius:

i) OCG:

While this card remains face-up on the field, DARK monsters cannot be destroyed by LIGHT monsters.

 

Holy Ground:

i) OCG:

While this card remains face-up on the field, all "Unicorn" monsters gain 700 ATK and DEF. Pay 700 Life Points during your End Phase. If you do not do this, this card is destroyed. (Life Point cost added because otherwise OPed)

 

Rating: 5/10.