2 New cards of mine [ Please Rate ] - Updated -

[M.B X]

[spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can destroy all face-down cards on the field and take damage equal to the cards destroyed this way x800. If this card is in your Graveyard you can pay 1000 Life Points for each card in your hand to add it to your Deck, shuffle it and draw 1 card.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]You can only equip this card to a face-up "Crane, Master of Martial Arts" on your side of the field. The equiped monster's effects that decrease your Life Points are negated, and destroy this card during the End Phase of your opponent's next turn.

 

 

 

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[Leturn Master]

Neither are useful. Why would I want a rounded-stat monster? Decks specify -- they go for defensive monsters or attacking monsters. "Crane" is a waste of space -- and for two tributes too. "Witching Hour" is also a bad card because it relies of "Crane" in order to be used -- so it's probably a dead draw most of the time.

 

I'd get rid of both of these cards. Neither one is useful.

[libasonmes528]

Good set, looks good, i would rate it..... about 9/10

[herrllo]

Sort of agree with Leturn, but it looks like you put some effort into them, Love the picture for Withching Hour! 7/10

[◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊]

They aren't useful whatsoever. Crane can easily be defeated, and his effect is truthfully dumb. Oh yes, I'd love to summon him for 200 more attack. Your opponent can easily just destroy him using a Spell, Trap or Monster Effect. Plus the Spell card, I don't know if it's worth words. I can't even go on.

[Crystal Alien]

Very good for a new card maker, though the cards are really not good at all lore wise.

 

But, 8/10 - For the fact your new. ^-^

[M.B X]

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