yays a noobs second card

[M0∑0]

my second card CnC dont flame

effect:This card can only be Normal Summoned by tributing 1 Face-up Machine-type monster you control. If your opponent controls only Face-down Defense Position monsters, this card can attack directly. If this card is targeted by the effect of a Trap Card, you can pay 900 Life Points to negate the activation of the Trap Card.

 

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Hmmmm.... Hes a good card. His effect is good, and not to OVP'd. I'd sadly only give him a 8.5 out of 10 though.

[radio414]

What happens to the trap card once it's negated.

[Wanderley]

What happens to the trap card once it's negated.

 

that is not important

[M0∑0]

What happens to the trap card once it's negated.

 

mm good point, ill think oh and teh thanks

[Zeaux]

I will correct your OCG

 

This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up Machine-Type monster. If your opponent controls only face-down Defense Position monsters, this card can attack directly. If this card is targeted by the effect of a Trap Card, you can pay 900 Life Points to negate (Now my opinion for a better effect) and return it to your opponent's hand.

 

Your OCG is pretty good for a 2 stars member

Just need to work a little more to be perfect

Here is the link for the OCG thread -> http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-118387.html

 

Rate -> 8/10 Keep it up

[Yugiohrulez!]

Thats a good idea. 10/10

[radio414]

What happens to the trap card once it's negated.

 

that is not important

 

Yes, it is, It could be like malfunction (Set Again), or Seven tools of Bandit (destroyed)

[M0∑0]

thanks

[ANBU]

8.75/10

[[Kagerius_XxX]]

Thats a good idea. 10/10

the card is pretty good, but you suck at rating

8/10

[M0∑0]

thanks

[id319]

pretty good, but the trap effect isn't right because you have to make it destroy a trap card, not negate it. if you were going for negate, though, I'd say you should write "and return it to its original position."

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overall, 8/10.

[SentienceLIFE]

No it doesn't have to say what happens to it after; theres a few cards in my RL deck that don't need that, one example is Tutan Mask, it just negates it but doesn't say anything else, in rule books its sent to graveyard unless stated otherwise.

 

Other than that very good! 9/10

[M0∑0]

thank ye sleen

[evilherospencersimpson]

With a card of a magnitude such as this, omly 1 phrase comes 2 mind. Im certain uve heard it before:

KICK. ASS. MO. FO.

[Love_Avail]

pretty good' date=' but the trap effect isn't right because you have to make it destroy a trap card, not negate it. if you were going for negate, though, I'd say you should write "and return it to its original position."[hr']

overall, 8/10.

 

actually thats not entirely true there are some trap cards that say Negate but dont follow up with "and return it to it's original position"

[M0∑0]

tanks for teh comments