-Xylon- Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 My first EVER card!!!please comment so as i progress i get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Well its not bad for a first card but what can i say to improve it.Problems:The pic is realistic.Animal is not a real type it should be Beats.In cards the ID is random the chance of it saying that is low.serial number seems a bit low chanced thats random too.The name is uncreative OCG problems:Atk=ATKSpell=spellCard=card good side:the effect is resonable.ATK and DEF reasonable.not a bad idea.you didnt use attatchemnts. ideas:change the pic to a more cartoony 1.change the name its uncreative.Make the effect better.Fix the errors.change the type. i think youll do ok a rating of 5.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Effect doesn't have any relation to the picture. Fail/10-a.k.a.-0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Effect doesn't have any relation to the picture. Fail/10-a.k.a.-0/10 ummm its not that bad did you look at all the details 0/10 way too low and since what does the effect need to match the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Well its not bad for a first card but what can i say to improve it.Problems:The pic is realistic.Animal is not a real type it should be Beats.In cards the ID is random the chance of it saying that is low.serial number seems a bit low chanced thats random too.The name is uncreative OCG problems:Atk=ATKSpell=spellCard=card good side:the effect is resonable.ATK and DEF reasonable.not a bad idea.you didnt use attatchemnts. ideas:change the pic to a more cartoony 1.change the name its uncreative.Make the effect better.Fix the errors.change the type. i think youll do ok a rating of 5.7/10 i agreeEffect doesn't have any relation to the picture. Fail/10-a.k.a.-0/10 and i don't agree thats way to harsh it's the first card i bet you'r first card wasn't that good. i think it's a good piece of work so i give 4/10 but it does need work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elementalherosmash Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Great for a new member8/10 well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Great for a new member8/10 well done maybe but i think thats a bit to kind but anyway i supose he has done a good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elementalherosmash Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Well its good not like other members make worse cards i like this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 take more time on your cards, this is almost complete failure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Well its not bad for a first card but what can i say to improve it.Problems:The pic is realistic.Animal is not a real type it should be Beats.In cards the ID is random the chance of it saying that is low.serial number seems a bit low chanced thats random too.The name is uncreative OCG problems:Atk=ATKSpell=spellCard=card good side:the effect is resonable.ATK and DEF reasonable.not a bad idea.you didnt use attatchemnts. ideas:change the pic to a more cartoony 1.change the name its uncreative.Make the effect better.Fix the errors.change the type. i think youll do ok a rating of 5.7/10 Effect doesn't have any relation to the picture. Fail/10-a.k.a.-0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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