Coyote Starrk¤ Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 [align=center]Hi Guys. This is my first card. And i know it sucks but i had to make atleast 1 card. Image credit goes to Father Wolf. So how did I do ?[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 meh, could be a lot better. take more time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coyote Starrk¤ Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 meh' date=' could be a lot better. take more time.[/quote'] Hey ! This was my first you know ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Good card. Change Sacrificing to Removing.7/10And change the first sentence toEach time a Trap card is activated, place 1 Scream-Counter on this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 meh' date=' could be a lot better. take more time.[/quote'] Hey ! This was my first you know ? [align=center]Hi Guys. This is my first card. And i know it sucks but i had to make atleast 1 card. Image credit goes to Father Wolf. So how did I do ?[/align] i could tell. i am just saying, put more thought into it. think how it will work with what other cards in what type of decks and what cards would support it better than others. it takes some getting used to, but you'll get it ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Good card.(how can you be a legendary member with 1star,6posts,and 1card?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Its to under poweredTrap card = Trap CardCounter's = Countersmonster card = monsterormonster card = card"By sacrificing 5" = "By removing 5"OK job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Hmmm... Animefan has a point, but Anime, let Ingo-san have their fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coyote Starrk¤ Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Okey. Next time I'll do a much better card. Thanks for help you all. how can you be a legendary member with 1star' date='6posts,and 1card?[/quote'] I just changed my user title ^^, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Good card.(how can you be a legendary member with 1star' date='6posts,and 1card?)[/quote'] lrn2chngtitle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 I can't wait to see your next card. Make it soon. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Surprised no one's thought of it before. I'd say give it two Scream Counters for each Trap Card; it could be killer in a Trap-heavy deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coyote Starrk¤ Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Lord Smeagle i don't get what are you saying xD . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Change the effect so it says: Each time a Trap Card is activated, place 2 Scream Counters on this card. That way, 3 Traps = 6 counters = getting the effect off, plus 1 left over. And I'm surprised nobody thought of changing their user title to "Legendary Member." I always assumed it wouldn't let you do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coyote Starrk¤ Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Well , thanks for help ! :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 add a Scream Counter onto this card = place 2 Scream on this card (In these parathesis, you must put the max amount of Scream Counters: max ?) -4 (Three errors corrected)By sacrificing 5 Scream Counter's you can destory 1 monster card on the field. = You can remove 5 Scream Counters from this card to destroy 1 Monster Card on the field. -3 (Three errors fixed) Please fix those errors. -6 OGC errors in all -1 Editing Effect -7 points in all. Final Rating: 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coyote Starrk¤ Posted June 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Well this is my first card. And I'll try to do better job next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Still, you should fix the errors, so your card looks better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
id319 Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Trust me, ingo-san this card is 7/10 but also has flaws, like what about magic jammer is activated and then an infinite loop starts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 Boring effect. Cold have done something more useful. Destroying monsters is *yawn*... Make it prevent certain cards, or RFP, or switch positions. Also make it less Underpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
id319 Posted June 6, 2009 Report Share Posted June 6, 2009 also, only legendary members are allowed to be called legendary members. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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