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Well here is my first card, image credit is on the card.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 DARK monsters you control. Discard 1 Spell card from your hand to negate the effect of 1 opponent Trap card. If you control a LIGHT monster, increase the attack of this card by 400.

 

Any thing i can improve on?

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I'll give my 2 cents, though I'm not sure if it is correct:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 2 DARK monsters on your field. Discard 1 Spell card from your hand to negate the activation and destroy 1 Trap card of your opponent. If you control a LIGHT monster, increase the attack of this card by 400.

 

Good effect. Very balanced. Good actually been given a bit more ATK and DEF--very little more though. In my opinion, I think his title should be "Batman - The Dark Knight", but Avenger is good, too. Very good picture and though it's Holo, it looks like rain--either or, it makes it that more kick-ass. Sidenote: I am pretty sure you aren't allowed to use DeviArt, unless you have the artist's consent--not GodModding, but don't want any trouble to surround you. Great card! 9.5/10, only because of the slight dislike of Name Title, and the bit of slightly underpowered ATK. That's just my personal preference. Keep it up!

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