Coyote Starrk¤ Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 [align=center]Hey. This is my second card. I know there are some OCG errors and the name is bad but i didn't have a clue for name. So here it is. Warrior of the Heaven Picture credit goes to Father Wolf^^, Effect : This monster cannot be destroyed by battle while it remains in face-up Attack Position (Damage Calculation is still applied normally). This card can attack your Opponent directly. Each time this card battles a monster increase it's ATK by 100. Tell me what to fix![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nox Piscis Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 You've got a source, that's good.It's not a bad idea at all, the name matches the picture and such.I'll try to fix the OCG, not sure if I'll do it correctly. This monster cannot be destroyed by battle while it remains in face-up Attack Position (Damage Calculation is still applied normally). This card can attack your Opponent directly. Each time this card battles a monster increase it's ATK by 100. Overall I think you did a nice job, you've put some effort into it, just some OCG errors, that's all. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coyote Starrk¤ Posted June 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Okeii. Thanks for help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 No his fix is wrong While this card is in attack position it cannot be destroyed by battle. Damage Calculation is normally. This card can attack directly. Each time this card battles a monster increase it's ATK by 100. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schitzofrenic Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 wanderly your ocg is also of on the second sentance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Very good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soulrobber666 Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Sweet card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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