My first set of cards.

[Shaltenn]

The idea for these cards is for a fanfic I plan on writing. One of the characters introduced later will use these cards as a staple.

 

I have tried to keep the effect close to what the actual card game would say but This is my first attempt at anything like this. If you guys have any suggestions or criticism I will be glad to hear them.

 

Also I got to admit some of these are really long.

 

When this card is activated place one retribution token on a monster with "Servant of the Lord" in its name. When a monster with a retribution token is destroyed in battle by an opponents monster the attacking monster is removed from play. If there is no retribution token on the field during the controllers standby phase pay 500 Life Points to place a retribution token on a monster you control with "Servant of the Lord" in its name or destroy this card.

 

When this card is activated place one Protection token on a monster with "Servant of the Lord" in its name. Any monster with a Protection token must be switched automatically to defense mode and may not change to attack mode. Once per battle phase the controller of this card may change the target of an attacking monster to a monster with a protection token. If there is no Protection token on the field during the controllers standby phase pay 500 Life Points to place a Protection token on a monster you control with "Servant of the Lord" in its name or destroy this card.

 

When this card is activated place one Martyr token on a monster with "Servant of the Lord" in its name. Once per turn when your opponent activates a spell or trap card you may remove from play a monster on the field with a martyr token on it to negate and destroy the activated spell/trap card. If there is no Martyr token on the field during the controller of this cards standby phase pay 500 Life Points to place a Martyr token on a monster you control with "Servant of the Lord" in its name or destroy this card.

 

When this card is activated place one Zeal token on a monster with "Servant of the Lord" in its name. Any monster with a zeal token on it may attack twice in one battle phase but may not attack an oppenents life points directly unless no monster is on your opponents side of the field at the beginning of the battle phase. If there is no Zeal token on the field during the controllers standby phase pay 500 Life Points to place a Zeal token on a monster you control with "Servant of the Lord" in its name or destroy this card.

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or special summoned if the cards controller controls a Fiend type monster and no fiend type monster can be special summoned or normal summoned onto the same side of the field as this card. If your opponent controls A fiend type monster on his/her side of the field during the battle phase this card must attack a face up fiend card. If this card has a Retribution, Protection, Zeal, or Martyr token on it remove this card from play to special summon "Paladin of the Lord - Arcadius" from you're hand.

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or special summoned if the cards controller controls a Fiend type monster and no fiend type monster can be special summoned or normal summoned onto the same side of the field as this card. If your opponent controls A fiend type monster on his/her side of the field during the battle phase this card must attack a face up fiend card. If this card has a Retribution, Protection, Zeal, or Martyr token on it the controller can pay 1000 life points to remove one card from the field.

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or special summoned if the cards controller controls a Fiend type monster and no fiend type monster can be special summoned or normal summoned onto the same side of the field as this card. If your opponent controls A fiend type monster on his/her side of the field during the battle phase this card must attack a face up fiend card. If this card has a Retribution, Protection, Zeal, or Martyr token on it You may remove the token in order to gain 1000 life points. A Retribution, Protection, Zeal, or Martyr token may not be placed upon this card for two standby phases after using this effect

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or special summoned if the cards controller controls a Fiend type monster and no fiend type monster can be special summoned or normal summoned onto the same side of the field as this card. If your opponent controls A fiend type monster on his/her side of the field during the battle phase this card must attack a face up fiend card. If this card has a Retribution, Protection, Zeal, or Martyr token on it this card gains 200 ATK points

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or special summoned except for by the ffect of "Servant of the Lord - Gabriel". This card counts as having "Servant of the lord" in its name. No fiend type monster can be special summoned or normal summoned onto the same side of the field as this card. If your opponent controls A fiend type monster on his/her side of the field during the battle phase this card must attack a face up fiend card. When this card is special summoned onto the field all monsters with "Servant of the Lord" in its name in your hand, deck, graveyard, or on the field except this one is removed from play. This cards ATK and DEF points are equal to 500 x the number of cards removed from play. This card can only attack if it has a Retribution, Zeal, and Martyr token on it.

[evilherospencersimpson]

EPIC!

30/10!

[-Griffin]

I'm personally not a fan of the pictures, since I can be very fussy over them indeed. That's the reason I tend to stick to the Writen Cards section. Most of the cards seem to have reasonable balance.

First, I'll fix the beggining of the effects;

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Special Summoned if you control a Fiend-Type monster. You cannot Summon Fiend-Type monsters. If your opponent controls a Fiend-Type monster, this card must select a Fiend-Type monster as an attack target.

 

I don't think it's perfect, but it works better. The rest of the text isn't all correct either, I'll look at fixing it later if I get the time.

 

Overall, a fairly nice set, although that last card might actually be a little weak, the monsters are two single tributes, two double tributes and a nomi, you wouldn't run all of these at max in a Deck, probably 1/2 of each, so he'd have around 3000 ATK, 4000 if you really ran a lot of the cards, not great when you just RFG'd a lot of your monsters and he's the ace.

[Shaltenn]

Thank you good sir! I do have to say though that I wanted to get the big guys out of the way first. These are by far NOT the only "Servant of the Lord" cards I plan on making.

 

Edit: Have to ask. Do you believe I should give Paladin of the Lord a boost in power?