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Has bad OCG on some but then good on others... I think u make pretty good normals... u gots good descriptions...


the carrier's effect seems kinda' dumb... There not gunna get destroyed because he'll probly be in defense...


Strong amongst the weak seems like a good card but is op'd for tuning... You could summon basically any synchro that doesn't have special requirements with it... and on top of that you could just use it for tributin...

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Okay, I guess. Some thoughts:

 

i) I don't think Quick-Play Trap Cards exist. Change it to a Counter Trap Card.

ii) Try not to make Vanillas.

iii) Your Ritual Monster will have this at the beginning of its effect:

"This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Ritual of The Blade"...."

iv) Make Conlangelo a Lv.7

v) 'attack' and 'defence' are written ATK and DEF

vi) 'with people in its name' is written 'all "People" monsters"

vii) 'one' should be '1'

viii) 'defence points' should be 'DEF'

 

You'll still need to work on these, as I've just pointed out basic errors.

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Neogadget I believe is referring to Tuner monsters: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Tuner

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