lorden Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Hello everybody,,,, im a newbie in this site,,,, BTW im a Yugioh fanatic since birth,, LOL..... Im a writer and i want to make cards based on the characters of my story entitled LORDEN,,, my cards are NOT realistic,, i made them just for fun.. Monster cards Story based spell cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Ok for newbie 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 agreed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 heh wow, I remember when I first came to this site with a story, that I wanted to turn into a show, and I tried to make something simliar to this. Besides that, Good cards, Some OCG errors but 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowwolf17 Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Here, let me help. Fake sub types(Beast, beast-warrior, spellcaster, ect.)are not allowed. If fire is a sub type, you say pyro. Water=aqua. wind, earth=attribute on the tope of the card. But for a newbie, o'k. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Eros is......uh...the god of phisical love (S*X)... Other then that, the effects are very creative. Just, you might want to give Gaia ATK. Just in case its effect doesn't work. Also, I thought that it was sort of All-Oped. Yes, it is true that they are cool (especially the awesome pics) but it lacks in balance a little. Just, it is overall awesome for a newbie! 8/10 with newbie bonus! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ashaf_writer Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Yeah...ok. I'd say a 6/10. What Kenta the Forbidden One said was true, the Eros things is a little....Well, the cards were okay, a good start. (look at me, no cards posted at all :P ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadeZero Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 5/10Text in pictures is bad unless it looks good.Lorden has white lines on the edges.Over Powered.Types are all wrong[Fake] Divine-Breaker <-- (You put Greaker @ one point)You put attributes as there types which isn't needed.And ATK/ --- DEF/ --- <-- No.. It's ATK/ ? DEF/ ? =/Lastly the OCG needs work. But, yeh nice try for a Newbie =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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