proteininja Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 This has probably been done a million times, but I actually think this card is pretty balanced, so I wanted to see what you guys thought. mmmmm...paunch... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpartanGio Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 It's a.... strange effect, I guess it is balanced, ocg errors, the pic is squashed I'm pretty sure you can't put that shout part in the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
proteininja Posted June 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 How would you suggest I improved the OCG? I am new at this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpartanGio Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Capitalize the first letters in Summon, Set, Life Points, change numbers like one to 1. Then it would be good, just get a new pic too :) Other than that pretty nice 5/10, just change what I told you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
proteininja Posted June 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 How is this? Also, how do I get an image of my card with the highest possible quality? The text is a little blurry. The way I got this one is by clicking on the preview, and the jpg it gives me is pretty low quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benoit4ever Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Try this:With "Falcon Punch!" Exclamation/9001 ATK This card cannot declare an attack. When this card is Summoned, destroy all monsters you control (excluding this card). As long as this card is face-up on the field, no monsters may be Summoned. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you may activate the following effect by exclaiming "Falcon Punch!":If your opponent controls a monster, you may destroy one card on the field. If your opponent doesn't control a monster, inflict 9001 damage to your opponent. Without "Falcon Punch!" Exclamation/Balanced Effect This card cannot declare an attack. When this card is Summoned, destroy all monsters you control (excluding this card). As long as this card is face-up on the field, no monsters may be Summoned. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, if your opponent controls a monster, you may destroy one card on the field. If your opponent doesn't control a monster, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Uh, to be honest, I think that says "9001". If so, I really think that it's way overpowered, and seems to be a joke card in some respects. I am not saying I am right, or anything, I'm just givin' some criticism. If you were aiming for a joke card, then this is the wrong section, and good card! But, if you were serious, just hear my suggestions out. As a Joke Card: 9.6/10 [Picture is "squashed"] As a "Real" Card: 5.7/10 [Overpowered effect; Picture is "squashed"; Too many *'s; ATK/DEF is overpowered] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpartanGio Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Scratch it, it's fine, 6/10, only thing worng I see is Battle Phase needs to be capitalized (the first letter) and the whole shout "Falcon Punch" thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 I love this card. Great OCG, now the pic is great. The effect is pretty cool as well. 7/10 (and just to add some awesomeness)FALCO PUNCH! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
proteininja Posted June 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Try this:With "Falcon Punch!" Exclamation/9001 ATK This card cannot declare an attack. When this card is Summoned' date=' destroy all monsters you control (excluding this card). As long as this card is face-up on the field, no monsters may be Summoned. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you may activate the following effect by exclaiming "Falcon Punch!":If your opponent controls a monster, you may destroy one card on the field. If your opponent doesn't control a monster, inflict 9001 damage to your opponent.[/b'] I don't want it to allow the opponent or myself to set monsters either. does this working cover that? Without "Falcon Punch!" Exclamation/Balanced Effect This card cannot declare an attack. When this card is Summoned' date=' destroy all monsters you control (excluding this card). As long as this card is face-up on the field, no monsters may be Summoned. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, if your opponent controls a monster, you may destroy one card on the field. If your opponent doesn't control a monster, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.[/b'] Uh, to be honest, I think that says "9001". If so, I really think that it's way overpowered, and seems to be a joke card in some respects. I am not saying I am right, or anything, I'm just givin' some criticism. If you were aiming for a joke card, then this is the wrong section, and good card! But, if you were serious, just hear my suggestions out. As a Joke Card: 9.6/10 [Picture is "squashed"] As a "Real" Card: 5.7/10 [Overpowered effect; Picture is "squashed"; Too many *'s; ATK/DEF is overpowered] I really think this card can be balanced with 9001 attack. First of all, it can't use it unless its effects are negated(which they would have to be retarded to do, and you could not do on your own)Also, he can be removed from the field by just about every magic and trap. Just imagine it says this card cannot be destroyed by battle or something. Here is the next version. I think this one is balanced as long as no one can set monsters. Can someone tell me if the wording permits it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cell0097 Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 I dont really get the 9001 thing. Is there any reason for it? (Don't really know too much about F-Zero) Or is it simply a play on the whole "Over 9000" thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
proteininja Posted June 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 I dont really get the 9001 thing. Is there any reason for it? (Don't really know too much about F-Zero) Or is it simply a play on the whole "Over 9000" thing? It is a play on the over 9000 thing BTW is there anyway to get a higher quality image of this so i can print it?Behold' date=' the awesomeness... and rate it, because I am done changing it... [img']http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/9025/308436m.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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