Mogra cards

[Izicu]

Another series of cards I made.

 

[mech king]

14/20 you have bad OCG and please don't use nillas

[fish-eye]

mech king is right about the OCG and other grammer mistakes(like i'm one to talk) but i think that the normals seem to be ok here in this set seeing that the other cards kinda support them. 8/10

[Max Darkness]

A few thoughts (ie some changes you could make):

 

Goragh:

I just don't like Vanillas. It would be nice to give it an effect.

 

Jarak:

When this monster destroys a monster by battle, Special Summon 1 "Mogra" monster whose Level Stars are equal to or less than the destroyed monster from your hand.

 

Freena:

As long as this card is face-up on the field, your opponent must discard 1 card from their hand during their End Phase.

 

Yorganoi:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Mogra" monster on your side of the field. This card gains 200 ATK for every "Mogra" monster in your Graveyard and gains 200 DEF for every "Mogra" monster on the field.

 

Soldier of Mogra:

Vanilla. Enough said.

 

The Planet Mogra:

i) I would have thought that these creatures would come from a land called Mogra, instead of an alien planet. Perhaps you could rename this card "Mogra" and have it depict a city, castle or kingdom, because I think that would work well.

ii) The part about only being able to summon "Mogra" monsters needs an LP cost, because it is a very powerful effect. For example:

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, each player must pay 500 Life Points to Summon a non-"Mogra" monster. All "Mogra" monsters gain 400 ATK and DEF. Pay 1000 Life Points during each of your End Phases. If you do not, this card is destroyed.