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Need help with the OCG on this card.


soulrobber666

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Hey I'm working on a series of monsters called Foolspawn monsters. I was trying to make a "balanced OP'd card" - the most powerful card of the set. But I can't get the wording right. I'm not even sure that anyone is gonna fully understand the effect. Any ideas? (both for OCG and balancing out in case it's too powerful):

 

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Card Lore:

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Foolspawn" monsters.

This card is not destroyed in battle. When this card is about to be destroyed by the effect of a card, remove it from play. During your Standby Phase, Special Summon this card to the field. It is unaffected by the effect of cards of the same type as that which removed it from play. When this card is Special Summoned through its own effect, increase its original ATK by 1000.

 

 

The point of this card is eventually to be able to bring it back with 3000 and it being unaffected by traps, spells, and monster effects.

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[align=center]ocg fix:

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Foolspawn" monsters.

This card is not destroyed by battle. When this card is targeted by an effect that destroys this card, remove this card from play. During the next Standby Phase this card was destroyed, Special Summon this card to your the field. It is unaffected by the effect of cards of the same type as that which removed it from play. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect, increase its ATK by 1000

 

It's a decent card, but the effect is confusing and unuseful. It removes itself from play, so the scored words are un-needed.

I'm not sure about the Synchro thing though...

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This better?

 

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Card Lore:

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Foolspawn" monsters

This card is not destroyed by battle. When this card is targeted by an effect that destroys this card, remove this card from play. During your next Standby Phase after this card was removed from play, Special Summon this card to your field. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect, increase its ATK by 1000.

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