Necro Pheonix Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 This is a new card of mine and i know im not good at ocg so if you could help with that, that would be great.effect: when this card is summoned you can discard your hand. If you do this, you can treat one of your spell & trap card zones as a monster card zone and move this card to the selected zone. When this card is summoned, you can special summon 2 LIGHT monsters from your deck. When this card is destroyed, all monsters summoned with this effect are destroyed as well. During each of your standby phases you must pay 1000 life points(this is not optional). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 A few thoughts: i) V. bad pictureii) 'fairy' should be 'Fairy'iii) OCG: When this card is Summoned, you can discard your hand. If you do this, you can treat 1 of your Spell & Trap Card Zones as a Monster Card Zone and move this card to the selected Zone. When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 2 LIGHT monsters from your Deck. When this card is destroyed, all monsters Summoned by this card's effect are destroyed as well. During each of your Standby Phases, you must pay 1000 Life Points (this is not optional).(That should be it...) iv) A better pic (possibly): http://balinets.deviantart.com/art/Angel-30303601 Overall...6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 I like the concept, and I would tell you, your wrongs, but all has been mentioned above. I am planning to make cards like this for a Deck. Good job. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 pic is bad, like the effect very balanced reminded me of the archfiend cards, Max Darkness did the ocg expect that it not Normal Summoned but Summoned. Overall 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted June 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neogadget lord Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 isnt that a "duelmaster's" card game card image? might just be me but i swear it is... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bangverde Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 pic is bad, like the effect very balanced 'fairy' should be 'Fairy' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted June 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 idk i never played it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neogadget lord Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 o... well i has one question... is that payment every turn or just the first one? you should specify... This guy reminds me of the crystal beasts kind of... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted June 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Fixed. Thanks for the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 The new pic is better in my opinion. Though you still didn't capitalized most of the words in the text. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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