WhightKnightMan Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 My White Knight King of my White Knight series :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 An okay idea, but there are some problems: i) An overused idea.ii) It's a Level Eight, but has the ATK of a Lv.10, change its ATK to 3000.iii) If it's a Union Monster, then you need to add a Union effect.iv) It's quite a basic effect. You could try:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "White Knight" and 1 other Warrior-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, Special Summon the monsters used as Tributes." Work on your OCG too. Rating: 3/10 for the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rook Bishop Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 kinda agreed with Max Darkness. Since it also a Union type it basically must support the card it combining with. overall 6/10 i like it but it have many holes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 An okay idea' date=' but there are some problems: i) An overused idea.ii) It's a Level Eight, but has the ATK of a Lv.10, change its ATK to 3000.iii) If it's a Union Monster, then you need to add a Union effect.iv) It's quite a basic effect. You could try:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "White Knight" and 1 other Warrior-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, Special Summon the monsters used as Tributes." Work on your OCG too.agreed Rating: 3/10 for the moment.[/quote']An okay idea' date=' but there are some problems: i) An overused idea.ii) It's a Level Eight, but has the ATK of a Lv.10, change its ATK to 3000.iii) If it's a Union Monster, then you need to add a Union effect.iv) It's quite a basic effect. You could try:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "White Knight" and 1 other Warrior-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, Special Summon the monsters used as Tributes." Work on your OCG too. Rating: 3/10 for the moment.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
balir1307 Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 okay, good picture, and the effect should go something along the lines of what Max Darkness said, change those and 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neogadget lord Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 isnt that the Lich king frum warcraft? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 overpowered and basic effectoverpowered atk. for a lv. 8if it's a union, add a union effect.that's the lich king from WoWhorrible OCG (Official Card Grammar) OCG Fix: You can Special Summon any "White Knight" card from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard when this card is Summoned. Advice: 1. get a better pic2. lower it's atk. by 10003. give it a Union effect, like this. Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face-up "White Knight" monster you control, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster destroys an opponent's monster by battle, draw 1 card. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.) 4. fix that OCG5. give it a more unique effect Overall: 1/10 + 2 since you're a newbie = 3/10 if you take my advice: 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neogadget lord Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 you know something? i bet the lich king's never been to sparta... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 you know something? i bet the lich king's never been to sparta... Leonidas would put a can of whoop a** on him. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 please post your white knight series in one thread please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neogadget lord Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 and then they'd both kill the persians... haha goddamn persians and your army of mutated freaks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 and then they'd both kill the persians... haha goddamn persians and your army of mutated freaks... Yeah, 2000 soldiers my a**. Those soldiers were Epic Fail. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cell0097 Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Just an FYI, that picture is The Lich King from World of Warcraft. He is too well recognized to be referred to as anything else, (much less a white knight). i agree with everything Spartan said. Make those changes and the card will be much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 itz actualy computerwhiz98, but you can call me spartan if you like. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Please see the New WK thread. and stop posting. -rep for anyone who does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhightKnightMan Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Firstly, erase the "union" after "effect". Unoriginal card name. Other then that, might want to add to it as it seems uncreative and plain ATM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhightKnightMan Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Check Updated version Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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