geekdupfireball Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Hey, all. Here's the first card I've made that I'm putting onto the forums. Critique and comments welcome. :] http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/7808/307995.jpg' alt='307995.jpg'>[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neogadget lord Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Way too OverPowered... and the image kind of sux... overall: 4.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geekdupfireball Posted June 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 What do you suggest? Lowering the ATK and DEF? Putting a negative side to the effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 My first thought would be to turn this into a Ritual Monster...seeing how its summoned. Also, that would offset its slightly too powerful effect. i) Lowering the ATK and DEF is a good way of balancing.ii) You could also add an LP cost to the last part of the effect (say 500 LP) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geekdupfireball Posted June 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Okay, thanks. That helps a lot. I'll edit it right away. EDIT -- Okay, I edited "Emperor of Wizards" and added a new card. Thanks for the help! I'm pretty new to this, and a lot of the cards I've made recently don't look so realistic. EDIT -- Here's the Ritual Spell for Summoning "Emperor of Wizards." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 ovp'd but good for your first8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohfan79 Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 what everyone above said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geekdupfireball Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Okay, that's good. I'm trying to start a new Archetype, "Dreadfire" monsters. :] [align=center] [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holymush332 Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 lol you basically stole my pic for demon king zukei. If you want to know what I mean, jsut check my thread in my sig and go down to dark magician. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geekdupfireball Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 I apologize. I was unaware that anybody had used it, so I settled for it. BTW, do you have any comments on any of my cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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