edy121(etc) Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Tittle sez it all: RATE N COMMENT PLZ If you find OCG errors, plz tell me so i can fix them 21 cards!![spoiler=Underworld Ruler's Effect]If this card destroys a Monster as a result of battle, Special Summon that Monster to your side of the Field. The ATK and DEF of that Monster is halved.If this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 "Underworld Token" (Machine-Type/DARK/Level 5/ATK 2100/DEF 0) in Your side of the Field [spoiler=Portalius' Effect]Once per turn, if there are no monsters (except this card) on your side the field, you can Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster with and ATK of 2000 or less from your Graveyard to your side of the field and Equip it with this card as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 800 ATK and DEF. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) [spoiler=Unislam's Effect][ultra Mech - Torkas] + [ultra Mech - Tugirados]This card can attack your opponent directly. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your 5th turn after this card attacked, except with a card effect [spoiler=Electrode's Effect] "Gear Mechanic" + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card gains 1000 ATK for each Face-Up Machine-type monster card in the Field. All Face-Up Machine-type monsters on your side of the Field (except this card) cannot declare an attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 These are actually half decent. In truth I was expecting them to be a lot worse. 8/10 good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edy121(etc) Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 bump~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
happiness1 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZedsAlive Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 cool 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superfacto Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 I like them all and its a cool idea but i dissagree with a few due to being over poweredouboros needs to either perminantly stay in defance or get lower stats because that is just to powerful.raptor is to easy to inflict in the second turn so have it lose some points when its special summoned.torkas needs to lose some def or else he's just 2 strongeand dark strife should be 6 starsaside from these i really like the setkeep up the good work :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bob6993 Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 AWESOME CARDS 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jtop Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 sweet cards 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mordred.jr Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 these r awesome cards 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 They are half decent, some pics Have no background and some effects are too plain.....ocg seems allright. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gunggang777 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 many cards with no background 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cok_pis_bakar Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 good cards 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skull_Knight Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 nice work, not too overpowered.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 good pics and names. There are some cool effects and you have put some nice text into your Normal Monsters!! A few pics need to be changed like it has been said by others also you need to edit abit of grammer/OCG but nothing major mostly capital letters. You may also wanna re-read your Hunter Killer's text mate 8.5/10...go to a 9-9.5/10 after a few corrections and pic changes...Oh and System Virus its with a Y if thats what your going for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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