Infinitus Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Here is a poem I thought of. I'm not sure how it came to me or when, or even where the inspiration came from, but here it is.The Human Formula A mind to think, a mind to learnA heart to feel, a heart to loveA body to build, a body to breakA soul to soar, a soul to live. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 meh. four line poems are for weak imaginations. try a 16-line poem, that would be coolioer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 I have a good imagination, it's just I'm not too into poems, but somehow I made this. But, your opinion, your post, I won't object. Thank you for at least posting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 it sounds familiar meh. four line poems are for weak imaginations. try a 16-line poem' date=' that would be coolioer[/quote'] wtf i made one that long and it was good and all i got was flaming that is why i dont post that sort of thing here anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 I don't post here either because I know I'll be logically destroyed. I tend to look like an idiot when people can notice. Now back on topic, what do you think of the poem? Other than the fact it seems familiar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 it is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 I have a good imagination' date=' it's just I'm not too into poems, but somehow I made this. But, your opinion, your post, I won't object. Thank you for at least posting.[/quote'] but objecting is fun, you should try it =D it sounds familiar meh. four line poems are for weak imaginations. try a 16-line poem' date=' that would be coolioer[/quote'] wtf i made one that long and it was good and all i got was flaming that is why i dont post that sort of thing here anymore it wasn't a poem, it was a news report Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 I have a good imagination' date=' it's just I'm not too into poems, but somehow I made this. But, your opinion, your post, I won't object. Thank you for at least posting.[/quote'] but objecting is fun, you should try it =D it sounds familiar meh. four line poems are for weak imaginations. try a 16-line poem' date=' that would be coolioer[/quote'] wtf i made one that long and it was good and all i got was flaming that is why i dont post that sort of thing here anymore it wasn't a poem, it was a news report I tried objecting in a General thread when I was a newb, I got pwnd. Well, truth be told I can't remember but I'm pretty sure it happened. Now, can we try to stay on topic? Nazello, can you tell me anything else about my poem other than it's too small? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 I have a good imagination' date=' it's just I'm not too into poems, but somehow I made this. But, your opinion, your post, I won't object. Thank you for at least posting.[/quote'] but objecting is fun, you should try it =D it sounds familiar meh. four line poems are for weak imaginations. try a 16-line poem' date=' that would be coolioer[/quote'] wtf i made one that long and it was good and all i got was flaming that is why i dont post that sort of thing here anymore it wasn't a poem, it was a news report I tried objecting in a General thread when I was a newb, I got pwnd. Well, truth be told I can't remember but I'm pretty sure it happened. Now, can we try to stay on topic? Nazello, can you tell me anything else about my poem other than it's too small?everyone get pwned when they are a noob ;D it's ok to state the obvious as long as readers don't obviously know that you are stating it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 I have a good imagination' date=' it's just I'm not too into poems, but somehow I made this. But, your opinion, your post, I won't object. Thank you for at least posting.[/quote'] but objecting is fun, you should try it =D it sounds familiar meh. four line poems are for weak imaginations. try a 16-line poem' date=' that would be coolioer[/quote'] wtf i made one that long and it was good and all i got was flaming that is why i dont post that sort of thing here anymore it wasn't a poem, it was a news report I tried objecting in a General thread when I was a newb, I got pwnd. Well, truth be told I can't remember but I'm pretty sure it happened. Now, can we try to stay on topic? Nazello, can you tell me anything else about my poem other than it's too small?everyone get pwned when they are a noob ;D it's ok to state the obvious as long as readers don't obviously know that you are stating it. So you can say obvious things, just subtlely? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 Would be better as a short comic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 Would be better as a short comic. I think short comic strips are supposed to be funny. And I can't think of a way to make this funny. Is there anything else you can tell me about it? Or was that a way of saying "It sucks."? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted June 10, 2009 Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 okay how about it doesnt suck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infinitus Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2009 Okay......thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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