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Jake Felton

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Don't use attatchments, first off, they don't have a type, and don't have the correct synchro effect, the grammar, itself, isn't what I would expect and Synchro beast doesn't have a background image, whereas Syncro dragon's image is blurred, and you spelt Synchro wrong. They are pretty OPed, and you must always remember to use capitals for the start of every word in a monster name, I won't rate for now as I think improvement can be done but keep working at it.

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Work on these...a lot...

 

PM me if you need help

 

To further what I said:

 

Card 1:

i) Capitalise names

ii) Picture is awful

iii) It has no type

iv) It's shown as an Effect Synchro, yet doesn't have an effect

v) The 'effect' makes no sense

vi) The ATK and DEF are just plain odd (3560/3780?) Change to 3600/3800

 

Card 2:

i) Capitalise 'beast'

ii) 'editon' = 'Edition'

iii) It has no type

iv) It's shown as an Effect Synchro, yet doesn't have an effect

v) The 'effect' makes no sense

vi) The ATK is too high, reduce to 2500.

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