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My Cards i Made(YamiBakura)


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okay, im new to this forum, lol but not new to yugioh... but anyways, go easy on me this is my frist time posting my created cards, and lol and u guys might not like em lol but, im tryin to improve and i'll take comments from anyone, please be honest thnxs.

 

Okay i made tons of cards already and didn't know what to post, i made All of the Weapons (From final fantasy IE(Ruby, Diamond, Ultimate) Ect.. lol and im gonna post one of em now...

 

frist Sapphire Weapon

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A Sea Monster so Strong it can cause bad storms Effect: When On The Field

All Water Monsters gets a atk point boost by 800 Points.

 

2nd - The Galaxy Dragon Level 7 Star Monster.

Dragon/Ritual/Effect

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This card can only be Summoned By TGD Summoning Card and offering 2 monsters equal to level 7

The Galaxy Dragon Protector of the stars, the planets, the galaxy,

Effect Pay 1200 Life Points to gain control of one your opponents monsters for 2 turns.

 

 

I Personaly dont like the Sapphire Weapon's Picture, but i couldn't find another good one.

(ASLO I did not create any of theses pictures, and I Kinda understand the card making process, but not very smart at it, lol

 

Aslo if you guys like them or half way like em, i can post more, these kinda like a test, to see if im getting good or not in been tryin for 3 weeks.

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Sapphire Weapon. Several problems. First mistake. OCG. Pic is too blurry.

1. No Divine-Beast. Make it a Sea Serpent. It's an effect monster so it shouldn't say anything about it. And the effect should be read:

"When this card is Summoned, increase the ATK of all face-up WATER monsters by 800 points."

 

Galaxy Dragon. Several Problems. First mistake. Make it Level 8.

1. Its clean, except the effect is completely wrong.

"This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Card "The Galaxy Dragon Star Summoning" and offering monsters from your hand or field whose total Level equals 8 or more. Once per turn, by paying 1200 Life points, take control of 1 monster your opponent controls until the End Phase of your opponents next turn. (Not including the following.)

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Thank you, will fix these mistakes, sorry.. like i said im kinda new to the ocg i never wrote any yugioh cards lol frist time getting someone to tell me if its bad, so ty i'll remake them, and try to improve the pic for the sapphire weapon, idk where i can find one better, aslo did anyone create sapphire weapon or any of the weapons from ff?

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