Paralus-Lord Of Death. R/F?

[Nox Piscis]

Effect:This card can only be summoned on a turn that one or more of your monsters were destroyed.When this card is summoned, all monsters' ATK and DEF are halved (Excluding this one.) When this card destroys a monster, it is special summoned to your side of the field. If this card is special summoned from the graveyard due to a monster's effect, it gains 500 ATK and DEF points. During the End Phase of your turn, this card is sent back to your hand.

 

Any thoughts on it? Is it good bad, etc?

[Force_Flex]

[align=center]Here's teh fix:

This card can only be Summoned when 1 or more of your monsters were destroyed.When this card is Summoned, decrease all monster's ATK and DEF by half (excluding this one.). When this card destroys a monster, Special Summon it to your field. If this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard because of a monster's effect, increase this card's ATK and DEF by 500. During the End Phase of your turn, this card is sent back to your hand.

 

I re-worded some of the stuff and fixed the caps.

gain=increase

special summon=Special Summon

graveyard=Graveyard.

 

It's a good card but very OP'ed. Try to balance it out by giving it some negative effects with the ATK gain.[/align]

[Zeaux]

Correct OCG

 

This card can only be Summoned when 1 or more of your monsters were destroyed.When this card is Summoned, half the ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field (except this card). When this card destroys a monster, Special Summon it to your field. If this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard because of a monster's effect, increase this card's ATK and DEF by 500. Return this card to your hand during the End Phase of the turn it was Summoned.

 

Nice pic could you give me the link for it plz!!

I want to ise it for a new set that i am doing.

[Nox Piscis]

 

No problem Zeaux, here you go.