the forms of garra

[yogab]

[DeREVOLUTION]

-Horrible OCG

-Fake types

-blurry pics

 

FAIL

[HenriqueSakura]

make all of your card in a unique thread

[Shrekstasy]

Okay...

Instead of posting threads for each card, I would recommend to edit the initial post of one thread, so all the cards are on one thread.

 

For the Shukaku card, you need to learn to work a ritual card, as you didn't add the summoning effect. The card is also too weak for its level stars...reduce it to 7. The type should be more realistic, try Divine-Beast, Fiend, or simply Beast. The picture is overused, so find another, more original one. The first letter in the name should be capitalized, correct grammar is nice. The attribute would be more fitting as DIVINE or EARTH.

 

OCG fix for Shukaku:

(Insert Ritual effect). Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 100.

 

Gaara is pathetic here. =\

The first letter in the name should be capitalized. The type, realistically, should be Spellcaster. If you want the ATK/DEF stats at that, make the level 5. The picture is overused and low quality, so find another, like before.

 

The OCG fix should be:

Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, select 1 monster your opponent controls. Decrease the ATK of the selected monster by 200 until the End Phase of the turn.

[740kt]

Bad OCG. How do you summon Shukaku?

[Necro Pheonix]

Okay...

Instead of posting threads for each card' date=' I would recommend to edit the initial post of one thread, so all the cards are on one thread.

 

For the Shukaku card, you need to learn to work a ritual card, as you didn't add the summoning effect. The card is also too weak for its level stars...reduce it to 7. The type should be more realistic, try Divine-Beast, Fiend, or simply Beast. The picture is overused, so find another, more original one. The first letter in the name should be capitalized, correct grammar is nice. The attribute would be more fitting as DIVINE or EARTH.

 

OCG fix for Shukaku:

(Insert Ritual effect). Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 100.

 

Gaara is pathetic here. =\

The first letter in the name should be capitalized. The type, realistically, should be Spellcaster. If you want the ATK/DEF stats at that, make the level 5. The picture is overused and low quality, so find another, like before.

 

The OCG fix should be:

Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, select 1 monster your opponent controls. Decrease the ATK of the selected monster by 200 until the End Phase of the turn.

[/quote']

i agree but dont make it DIVINE make it earth. DIVINEs are always fails.

[Shrekstasy]

Okay...

Instead of posting threads for each card' date=' I would recommend to edit the initial post of one thread, so all the cards are on one thread.

 

For the Shukaku card, you need to learn to work a ritual card, as you didn't add the summoning effect. The card is also too weak for its level stars...reduce it to 7. The type should be more realistic, try Divine-Beast, Fiend, or simply Beast. The picture is overused, so find another, more original one. The first letter in the name should be capitalized, correct grammar is nice. The attribute would be more fitting as DIVINE or EARTH.

 

OCG fix for Shukaku:

(Insert Ritual effect). Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 100.

 

Gaara is pathetic here. =\

The first letter in the name should be capitalized. The type, realistically, should be Spellcaster. If you want the ATK/DEF stats at that, make the level 5. The picture is overused and low quality, so find another, like before.

 

The OCG fix should be:

Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, select 1 monster your opponent controls. Decrease the ATK of the selected monster by 200 until the End Phase of the turn.

[/quote']

i agree but dont make it DIVINE make it earth. DIVINEs are always fails.

 

It's supposed to be a sacred, powerful beast...but I see what you're getting at.

It's up to yogab to decide, anyways.

 

=)