Careless Whisper Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Stock Credit = Sinned-Angel-Stock CnC pleaseNo Cheerleaders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Wow. This is nice. Is it possible to see a coloured version? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Needs more depth. =P It's nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Wow. This is nice. Is it possible to see a coloured version? No Cheerleading. No, I don't want to make a colored version. The B/W gradient map is the feeling of the tag. Adding Color would make it senseless. Thank you raiN. I'll work on depth, anything else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Actually, this may be just me, but I think your light source is a bit too bright and distracts from the focal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Actually' date=' this may be just me, but I think your light source is a bit too bright and distracts from the focal.[/quote'] The light course is the focal. It's an artistic crack within the tag. The girl is only there to add a little more feeling to the tag.The entire tag is based around the saying, "A life will crack when mistakes are left forgotton." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Ah, then you're all good. =] Good concept, now that I think about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dotCUBED Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Alright, when you're doing your b/w mapping, try to mess up with the different kinds of values and chose the one you like the best and then work with that one... I'm feeling this could look better with different values. Also the parts of the effects that are on top of the girl are distracting since they take away from the quality of the stock itself. And I can see what you're trying to go for with the concept, but as I said, maybe if it was all behind te girl, it could look better... I like the way the text is going too, but it can be worked on as well. Overall it's pretty nice, but you could work some more on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Hehheh. :) Also, yes I know...before anyone says it.. Bad center focaling.. :P EDIT: I did try the different values, but this value worked best for the outcome. :) Also, since i said that the crack is supposed to be an Artistic Crack Within the Tag, I meant it's supposed to look like the entire tag was cracked in the middle, so the semi-seperated shards of the tag look like glass that's been put back into place like a jigsaw puzzle...so it wouldn't make much sense to put all of the effects behind the girl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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