Careless Whisper Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 Limited to an art forgottonOr loathed by all who rememberSeperated by a blank driftThrough cracks within the surprise Mistakes mistaken as uselessErased by a mind tenderizedMisunderstood so foolishlyOn which the surprise will take aReckless crack into a lifeI have mistaken as a lieErasing my own mistakesSo lost were my memories ~"A life will crack when mistakes are left forgotton" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThinCartoonGlove Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Wow... That was truly eloquent. Though I'm not that good, I decided to post one. Prose so eloquent and full of meaningOf the poet's burning thoughtsElaborated on the pageThings which can't be said aloudReleasing one's inner voiceYearning to be free Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 PaperThinCartoonGlove: That was good. Cut down your first line and it'll be even better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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