Bengal Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Diabolus Queen Effect: When this card inflicts damage to your opponent, activate 1 of the following effects based on the number of Monster Cards you control. -1-2: Remove from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard-3-4: Change the Battle Positions of all face-up monsters you control to Defense Position, their positions' cannot be changed during your next turn. -5: Send all DARK monsters on your field and in your hand to the Graveyard. Art by tattereddreams on DA Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iSTIX Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Capitalize Field.Put commas in some parts of the card.And the "-3-4" monster effect, you shift them to Defense Position right? so is it face-up or face-down? I know I'm just a lv.2, but pls. be more specific.Overall, I'll give it a 8/10 Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 exactly wat he said and pretty bad holo maybe pm pitski about some help cause his are epic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Thanks you two. @ blacksticks123: I've taken your corrections, but as for the specifying of face-up or face-down, I just assumed that since I stated "all face-up monsters" that another specification was not needed. @ ~AuXiLiArY~: Yeah, the holo wasn't my best, but thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 damage to your opponent's Life Points how many = the number of Remove from play 1 monster in your Graveyard field_______________________________________ Some nasty drawbacks there. I (and maybe other people) wouldn't attack with this card that often (If it was real, of course). The idea is alright though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabloco Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 So... this card is a total bad luck?? All its effects are against you. Unless you change the control to your opponent, this card is a bit useless. You know, you could put another effect a benefic one this time it would make it more interesting...Even though its well created, and the pic is cool 6,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L. Rutsah Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 oh please, bow before a true fiend queen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diabloco Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Sorry Gravemaster but your card has OCG errors and is OP, so keep trying (I just have a question for you... where did you got that pic??) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 damage to your opponent's Life Points how many = the number of Remove from play 1 monster in your Graveyard field_______________________________________ Some nasty drawbacks there. I (and maybe other people) wouldn't attack with this card that often (If it was real' date=' of course). The idea is alright though. 8/10[/quote'] Thanks for the OCG corrections, as for the effect, I had the thought that if you controlled a number of other monsters, the LP damage to your opponent would make up for the negative effects. After thinking about it though, maybe a higher ATK would make it more worthwhile to use. So... this card is a total bad luck?? All its effects are against you. Unless you change the control to your opponent' date=' this card is a bit useless. You know, you could put another effect a benefic one this time it would make it more interesting...Even though its well created, and the pic is cool 6,5/10[/quote'] Thanks for the thought, but I kind of wanted to keep the negative effect theme throughout, just for a different style of card. @ Gravemaster: Just comments and rates would be appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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