HenriqueSakura Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 [align=center]Soo i'm bored today and i maked this cardOCG errors help are welcome:When this card is succesfully Normal Summoned you can tribute 2 monsters you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard you can pay 500 Life Points to roll one six-sided die. If the result is 3 or less remove from play this card. If the result is 4 or more you can Special Summon this card. Special Thanks to:Jake Harper(OCG Help)Zeaux(Now i know how to spell assassin) plz rate^-^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iSTIX Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Capitalize Life Points."Sucefully"? You forgot an "s".You need a comma in some parts of the card.But overall, I'll give it a 7.5/10.Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake Harper Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 i can help,here you got: When this card is succesfully Normal Summoned you can tribute 2 monsters you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard you can pay 500 Life Points to roll one six-sided die. If the result is 3 or less remove from play this card. If the result is 4 or more you can Special Summon this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HenriqueSakura Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 thanks guys^-^I'll fix the card effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hero2die Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Nice Cardi would to give 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HenriqueSakura Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Thanks very muhc for rate buddie ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Its good but not very "special" , good idea for the effect tho. 8 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Great card Henrique Just the first part that I think is UP You need 4 monsters to activate its effectFirst you use 2 to tribute them more 2 to destroy only 1 monster!But still a good card 8/10Ronaldo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HenriqueSakura Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Great card Henrique Just the first part that I think is UP You need 4 monsters to activate its effectFirst you use 2 to tribute them more 2 to destroy only 1 monster!But still a good card 8/10Ronaldo oh yeahi forgeted that part'-'maybe i can make level 6 or 4NOOOOOoooooooooooOOOOOOSssssssssssSSSSaAaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaa!!!O cara do chinelo amy!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 yeah if you do this I will raise my rateO adriano ta me ouvindo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HenriqueSakura Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 oh rightnow it's better?Toca aqui peitinho! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Better now 8.9/10Bate... a foto! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HenriqueSakura Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 thanks zeauxmore rates peoples!!^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Ah and 1 errorAssasin = Assassin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HenriqueSakura Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Ah and 1 errorAssasin = Assassin I think Assasin it's rightdon't you remember Assasin (Hero)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 No it is assassin Check it on google translate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HenriqueSakura Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 ooh...i think i don't know spelllol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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