robertsonrashad Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Three phrases: OCG, grammar, and Types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertsonrashad Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Three phrases: OCG' date=' grammar, and Types.[/quote'] What is OCG and honestly, what is your overall rating because I just started? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 OCG means Original Card Grammar, and it means the way the text is written on the Actual cards. I'm hoping you know what grammar means, and by "Types" I mean only use actual types, like "Warrior", or "Beast." If you don't know all of them search for them. Overall rating? 3.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertsonrashad Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 OCG means Original Card Grammar' date=' and it means the way the text is written on the [b']Actual[/b] cards. I'm hoping you know what grammar means, and by "Types" I mean only use actual types, like "Warrior", or "Beast." If you don't know all of them search for them. Overall rating? 3.5/10Thanks man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Too many errors with the card wording and I don't have the time to correct them all. I recommend looking up the wording of existing cards using yugioh.wikia.com as a reference for your own cards. The balance to your cards are all over the place and create unfair advantages for the deck type. Some cards are copies of original cards like Ice Storm is exactly the same as Heavy Storm. Your Mr. Freeze Synchro monster is overpowered and needs to be balanced out but most of the cards in the deck suffer from similar issues. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 ok ok im really only commenting over one main point thats actually kind of a pet peeve of mine. that counter trap at the begining? is not a counter trap. why people like slapping the counter trap symbol on cards that should not have them is almost beyond me (i know you dont want anything to be chained to it) but look, counter traps are only in response to something (thats why their called counter) its almost right but its still not exactly a counter trap, instead of if you were attacked basically make it if you are attacked ect ect ect. either that or make it a normal trap because we dont need spell speed 3 cards that arnt supposed to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earthbound Ojamortal! Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Change the Ice Type to Aqua, Thats Real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 cchange the types or i'll reported this thread custom types are against the rules Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Good but needs to be a real type, and lots of OCG errors. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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