Exa Raiun Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Each time a monster is removed from play (except by the effect of this card), put 1 counter on this card (max 10). You can remove 2 counters from this card to Special Summon 1 removed from play Level 4 or lower monster. You can remove 4 counters from this card to remove from play 1 card on the field. You can remove 6 counters from this card to negate the effects of Spell and Trap Cards on the field until your next Standby Phase. You can remove 8 counters from this card to remove from play all cards on the field. You can remove 10 counters from this card to skip the next Draw and Battle Phase of your opponent. [align=center]This monster cannot be Special Summoned. This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. When this monster is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, put 3 counters on this card. Decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 500 for each counter. During your Standby Phase, you can remove 1 counter from this card. Counters cannot be removed from this card, except by its own effect. If this card has no counters, it gains the following effect:● During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.[/align] I have to admit, I'm not really sure if these cards are balanced or not, I tried my best with balancing it. That's why comments, opinions and such are well come! The first card can work well with "Macro Cosmos", while the second is an interesting one - she has really high stats for her Level, but because of the restrictive counters put on her when Summoned, she actually starts with 2000 ATK and 1500 DEF (3500-3x500 ATK and 3000-3x500 DEF), and the counters cannot be removed by an outer way (and because she is unaffected by Trap Cards, you cannot Skill Drain her, either.) I found the first image while browsing on 4chan, while I got the second on sizebooru Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I think its balanced. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 very awsome. sweet pic, balanced and a good combo card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Another card added - Restricted Angel Goddess has high potentials, but you have to be patient for her true power to shine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Bump... I'm really curious about the balance of my cards, especially the second one - I wonder how well it turned out ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
To-Chi Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Why do those pics look like their from some Bondage Hentai? But, yeah, pretty balanced, though Restricted Angel Goddess is a bit powerful, I think it's worth it. And I really like the Sealing Chains of Lost Hope's progressive potence. 60(Base Score) +10(Good OCG) +10(2 Good Pics) +20(2 Uncommon Concepts). These are superb cards that, with only a few other (In the case of Sealing Chains of Lost Hope), could alone be very formidable against a small number of set-ups (namedly RFP styles (which means I would be in troubl =P)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 For your first question: I don't know ithe source of the picture for the first card, but I'm sure the second one is an original picture, not related to any anime or game.For Restricted Angel Goddess, I tried to come up with an unusually powerful yet balanced monster. It also has a progression, if we think about it.For Sealing Chains of Lost Hope, I know that removed from play is a popular playstyle, that's why I thought that some unique card related to them could work well.Thank you for your opinion, especially that you gave a refined explanation for your review! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 the restricted angel is overpowered for a six star monster 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Now, I don't mean to be picky, but for the first card, this might be better. You picked nice pictures, and the balance is perfect. Each time a monster is removed from play (except by the effect of this card), put 1 counter on this card (max 10). During your Standby Phase (Replace this with any phase you wish), you can remove 2 counters from this card to Special Summon 1 removed from play Level 4 or lower monster. You can remove 4 counters from this card to remove from play 1 card on the field. You can remove 6 counters from this card to Negate the effects of Spell and Trap Cards on the field until your next Standby Phase. You can remove 8 counters from this card to remove from play all cards on the field. You can remove 10 counters from this card to skip the next Draw and Battle Phase of your opponent That's all. I thought the last effect looked weird, but I'm actually wrong. Anyway, just a little here and there, so great job. Pic: 9.9/10Effect's Originality: Like I care, this card is still awesome.OCG: 9.8/10Other: 9.9/10Total: 9.9/10 (Only because I never give out 10/10, for specific reasons.). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 nice art ^__^the monster card is overpowered to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 It kinda is, but I mean, 3 turns is a long while for it to get back to full strength. It could be in the Graveyard by then, so I don't see a problem there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exa Raiun Posted June 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 For Restricted Angel Goddess - her original ATK and DEF is high for a Level 6 monster, but check her effect - as I stated earlier, she actually starts out with 2000 ATK and 1500 DEF, and you cannot speed up the process with Counter Cleaner or Skill Drain, because of her effects. Also, she is vulnerable against Spell Cards and monster effects. It's one of those "Look how high the stats - oh yes, but it has its restrictions, like the name suggests" cards. I saw similar cards on the site. For Sealing Chains of Lost Hope: I reconsider adding that during your Standby Phase part. Thanks for the tip! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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