eddyg Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Quite a few OCG errors, but good concept. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadeZero Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 (3 turns)!!! <------ What the hell? Anyways Like Tin said, needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddyg Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 lol you have to roll the dice what are the errors???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadeZero Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I already stated one, and wth with the Vanilla boss and why does it say #2? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddyg Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 because its a different version of the valvagia and started what??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadeZero Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I said stated not started... your English isn't the best is it?Well, I said this in a previous comment (3 turns)!!! <------ What the hell?^That is bad OCG, rather silly tbh. The whole thing is to big to fix, so im fixing the most noticeable part.. 3 turns. also just noticed u put a long ................. WTF?remove that.. To think of it, that cards OCG rating is 6/10.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eddyg Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 sorry my eye is like clouded right now thats why and i put 2 turns!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Volvagia's pic is cool, but they don't use exclamation points, and if they did, it wouldn't be 5 of em. also #2? The first one, that's an original idea, but a really broke one. not only is the OCG messed up but that thing would get the Ban-Hammer faster than you can say "Fiber Jar". I know it's not supposed to be realistic but the OCG is enough to make it off, there needs to be a ":" after each thing. read other Yu-Gi-Oh! cards and try to see how they word it (recent ones are better). For example, for the last effect "Summon one monster from either player's Hand, Deck, or Graveyard regardless of Summoning Conditions", which by the way is the most broke part next to "this card stays on the field for 3 turns", which one also need a "Once per turn, you can roll a six-sided die etc. etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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